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You got quite a few spelling errors
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 : ORION
HP: Magic Punk
Book&Literature · kamidemond
First not is yours English it is language?
ch 0 1 CHAPTER 1 – THE BEGINNING OF A GREAT AND LONG ADVENTURE (Fixed)
Pokemon: A New Adventure Of Ash
Anime & Comics · Bloodnight
Forsaken ‘her’ (not him, her, Raynare is a girl)
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It would be ‘My parents didn’t know of my drinking and smoking’
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So Gildarts isnt allowed to improve? Only the MC can become better than he was the day before?
ch 80 Chapter 80 - Zeref.
Fairy Tail: Shinigami
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
Physiology , Im pretty sure thats the word that you’re looking for
Even with the devil's physics it still wasn't enough.
Bleach DxD
Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
What? Do you mean ‘Age Doesnt Matter’ ?
Chapter 28 Age isn't matter
Bleach DxD
Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
Its Nieces and Nephew
"My little cute nephews and niece!"
Bleach DxD
Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
You got some interesting world building hoing on here
ch 11 Chapter 11 Deal
Bleach DxD
Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
Isnt this guy supposed to be a reincarnated individual? Why cant He remember stuff at all?
What is Quincy? That was the first question that came to Ichigo's mind. Ryuken knew what he was thinking, so he explained it to him.
Bleach DxD
Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
Incantation, not ‘Incartation’
At five years old. Ichigo finished learning all of the Kido spells at the practitioner level without incartation. He also knew that his spiritual power was on par with those at the seat level, but his control over it was very poor.
Bleach DxD
Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
Dude, they jumble their names together to confuse people
ch 0 9 Return to Hogwarts
Superior Slytherin
Movies · G0ld3nj
In the Chamber of Secrets maybe, but this is Philosophers(Sorcerers) Stone and Passwords change periodically. Otherwise the Twins would have had a brilliantly easy means of pranking the Slytherins throughout their entire Hogwarts career
ch 0 4 Hogwarts Sorting
Superior Slytherin
Movies · G0ld3nj
Grayfia is married so choose someone else but the other two as far as I know are free game. As for gacha ticket rewards? I’d say maybe add in a few books, trash tier stuff like the Lockhart books from HP, S tier stuff like Lost Magic from Fairy Tail.
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Grindelwald is in Nurmengard, or whatever he named his prison, not Azkaban. Also; Names should be capitalized, as should titles of a person.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 Grindelwald and Harry
Overpowered Harry potter
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA