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.......

The air resonated with a deafening crack as Eliz's head collided with an oak tree branch, sending a shock wave of pain through her.

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Fantasy · kappukeki

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I smell... JEALOUSY[img=Feeling it]

"I didn't want to believe that you were a slut, but now I know you are, getting into Professor Alvis' pant for a few good grades, how cheap" Chloe's voice oozed with contempt, each word laced with venom.

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Fantasy · kappukeki

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The sun is really giving every body and object their moment🤣

Chloe, with her bobbed black hair and freckle-spotted face, stood at the forefront, her features bathed in the golden glow of the descending sun.

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Fantasy · kappukeki

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girl...WHAT?[img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Feeling it]

"No… What am I doing?" Eliz abruptly pushed him away, her voice tinged with uncertainty.

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Fantasy · kappukeki

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petition to have this man in C.ai[img=Your move][img=Unalived]

And then, in that charged moment, he breathed out a question that hung in the air like a forbidden promise, "Can I kiss you?"

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Fantasy · kappukeki

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[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

ch 0 1 Prologue - Part 1

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Fantasy · kappukeki

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1yr

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Miranda needs to be thrown off a bridge

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Fantasy · kappukeki

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1yr

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everyone's out to get her fr

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Fantasy · kappukeki

Rasp_Berry_6080

1yr

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The passage is well-written and uses vivid descriptions to paint a picture of the characters and settings.This prologue is fire tho, i want to see what happens nexttttttttt. THIS IS A GOOD FINDDDDDDDD