Badges 2
Moments 208
There is a big problem with the age of the main character. Kakashi created the Chidori when he was 12 years old during the 3rd Great Ninja War. Considering that Kakashi at the beginning of the Naruto manga was 26 years old and the main character of this fanfiction is 18 it means that your character created the chidori at the age of four.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 Chidori
I'm Inside Naruto Manga
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
Yome is not a canon character. He never appeared in the manga. Dojutsu are very rare, the humans who possess them are only the descendants of the Otsutsuki.
ch 0 5 No Surprises in Old Acquaintances
[Naruto]Sunagakure Legends:Genin's Comeback
Anime & Comics · BlackSheep9
It doesn't make any sense because Broly initially loses in a fight against someone who has a power of 1000 but after a while he unleashes his hidden strength and becomes significantly stronger. So saying that his power level is 920 is wrong.
ch 30 Kakarot
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Don't make things up. Broly had a power level of 10000 and it is precisely for this reason that he was sent to the planet Vampa
ch 30 Kakarot
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Broly was born with a power level of 10000 so he should have it higher now. It's okay that Raditz and Vegeta have a similar level because Raditz has had extra training from his brother but it's bad that they have exactly the same level.
ch 30 Kakarot
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Actually that's not true..... It's a common thing that there are few students in jujutsu high
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Nobara Kugisaki
Jujutsu Kaisen: Immortal
Anime & Comics · Clockwork_055
When Goku was born, Broly was still in the incubator. Why isn't Broly in the incubator yet?
ch 25 An Unexpected Variable
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
With meditation you become stronger because you improve your spirit. Goku and Vegeta only improved their bodies but after Vegeta trained his spirit with the inhabitants of Yardrat he understood how important it is to improve the spirit.
ch 0 3 Life On Planet Vegeta
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
They are demigods not gods.....
ch 23 The Odd Ferryman and the Arrival at the Realm of the Dead
Demigod Records: The Chronicles of the Son of Aphrodite
Book&Literature · TheDeathlyPrince
https://www.spiritfanfiction.com/historia/baldur-odinson-marvel-fanfic-16693196
Baldur Odinson: God of Light
Movies · Lonely_Translator