Lesha_Yadav

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2021-12-01 Joined Global
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Lesha_Yadav
Lesha_Yadav
11 months ago
Posted

The concept of the story is overall good just the use of age 16 seem a bit too much considering the act he must perform i mean I get a teenager wanting to do this and all but to build an entire empire when he isn't even legal enough to earn money himself to provide a valid excuse for his sudden wealth? overall loving the story and looking forward to it tho i am hoping for this story to be free without any locked chapter if not i might have to find the story elsewhere to read for free.

Lesha_Yadav
Lesha_Yadav
4 years ago
Commented

You won't be able to kill her Evelyn. She has Kira with her. he won't let anyone harm her.