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Author, how is the writing going?
ch 20 -News regarding the novel-
Alien Invasion of Another World
Fantasy · Imperial_Guard_42
I don’t remember whether I wrote this or not, but I don’t know English and I read through a translator. Therefore, I don’t know what I can advise on the account of grammar, because the translator will even out everything. That being said, there is something I can advise you. The first step is to work out the world and characters before they are pushed into each other. This should help you write a more unique story, but this is only in theory. I think it is also worth describing the alien races of the Empire in more detail. I've been reading and it always seems to me that they all behave like ordinary people. I wouldn't advise you to write big chapters. I, as a person who writes 10,000 words in each chapter, faced the problem of correcting and editing them. I think you need to write 1000-2000 words per chapter. This is the perfect size, neither too small nor too big. You should also add more thoughts to your characters. The reader and writer should understand the motives of the characters' actions, this will also add logic to them. In general, the rest of your work is good and interesting. Your idea is interesting and it needs to be developed further. So I wish you good luck.
ch 19 A small funeral and returning to Earth
Alien Invasion of Another World
Fantasy · Imperial_Guard_42
I like what has been written so far. True, the fantasy element of the book is TOO fantastic so far. By the way, if you need help with maps or names, I could help.
ch 19 A small funeral and returning to Earth
Alien Invasion of Another World
Fantasy · Imperial_Guard_42
I read through a translator so help me understand the issue. Do you mean the other universe or the other end of the universe in which they are located?
Looking proudly to the expansion, the captain could only smile, when the roof of the communication hub opened up to release a device the size of a fighter - aircraft, with the looks to match. The only difference was, that instead of weapons, it carried a very sensitive device, which would allow them access to a faster, stronger, and more reliable way to stay in contact with thier own universe.
Alien Invasion of Another World
Fantasy · Imperial_Guard_42
refineries? Are spaceships fueled with gasoline and oil? Or did I not understand something?
Of course one couldn't ignore the strategic importance of the platform itself, which from the standpoint of a proper orbital installation was still lacking when it came to functionality. Usually most of them were equipped with shipyards, factories, refineries, entire mining and housing complexes complete with shopping and entertainment districts, usually big enough, that they can be observed from the planet's surface even with naked eyes.
Alien Invasion of Another World
Fantasy · Imperial_Guard_42
In fact, even in science fiction, this is not realistic. Space bodies rarely collide with each other even in the orbit of a habitable planet, they also move very quickly, especially in the orbit of a habitable planet, and it will even be difficult to aim.
Targeting first focused on a few smaller chunks leading the others, however priority was changed the moment thier bigger variants have arrived. By the time they arrived, most of them were nothing more than debree, either harmlessly bouncing of the craft's shield or missing it entirely, burning up int the atmosphere of the planet. Still it took at least half an hour before the storm of rocks passed, leaving behind a good amount of chunks, and making sure that the area couldn't be used to build anything less one risked damaging the more sensitive equipments.
Alien Invasion of Another World
Fantasy · Imperial_Guard_42
Reading translations from English into Russian and vice versa is always difficult. Russian readers like it when they take the time to detail and that applies to me as well. I assumed that English readers might not like the way the story is over-detailed, but when I finish the volume I'll fix that somehow. And one more thing: I used Google translator to translate my work from Russian into English. Since chapter 31, I have been doing the reverse process to correct the flaws.
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An interesting start. Place science fiction with aliens with fantasy with magic and nonhumans.
ch 0 1 Prologue: A fallen star
Alien Invasion of Another World
Fantasy · Imperial_Guard_42
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