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Basement dwelling virgin author. .-.-.-.-.-

This reads like a my three beautiful wives are beautiful vampires clone from the beginning. Honestly this is me reading poison and injeesting poison. Your grammar is okay. Your world building sound exactly like MTBWV. The only unique thing I could pick out is the weird parasite in the MC’s soul. The writing order and dialogue is a complete mess. Why on earth would you talk to a parasite in your soul in the middle of a battle. It’s either the battle or the talking not both. I am sure you average trash WebNovel reader would like this, but I would never read this seriously. Oh and the MC acts like an adhd, edgy, horny teenager. Also if you are going to try and copy a novel off of another novel then at least copy a novel that is better than MTBWV. Why make a shitty wish fulfillment, when you can make a really interesting story. Examples: The Legendary Mechanic | Reverend Insanity | Lord of the Mysteries | Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor | The First Order

This is a Yandere slice of life with hardly any plot that you need to pick apart from all of the chapters that glorify Victor. Only read this for delusional self fulfillment! The author could have made this something more than just 600-700 chapters of mostly filler and then the mc suddenly gains like what 25, 30 wives in two chapters. No real character development no, the flimsy reason the author gave was oh victor in hell for 500 year and did not see his wives; now victor goes and f*cks all of his 7 wives realatives and women in 500 sq ft. You know what happens next… guess.. all of the women fucked by the mc now automatically become his wives and they just accept it with no reason other than; oh mc handsome must fuck like some brainless whore dog. The author is the biggest disappointment to this novel give any other established author who does not write harem this novel and they will do a 💯% better job. Better than the monkey brain shit the author puts out. Wait I should apologize to the monkeys.🙊

Story needs more development and world background is feels incomplete at the time of review.

The fact that your name is Ero something already made your argument irrelevant.

And have you ever thought about he probably just wants to survive in his new world using most of his past life knowledge. I mean what else is he going to do with the knowledge sit on his ass? Also he has his sister to pamper. The only reason why you made this review is cause the author does not specifically tell you his driving goals that or you are right and the author fails to give the mc a goal.

The authors grammar is also garbage.

So are you going to answer my question of why do you write this novel?

So when are we going to leave whatever the name of the planet is? -——_——-—• But on a more serious note why do you write this novel? It is not particularly create it’s just something trashy to read when you are bored and want to fantasize about having a harem of beautiful women. And the amount of honest rating on webnovel are null, nill, zero, nada. However you want to say either bot spammed ratings or people who have not read a real book, save their souls…. Anyway on another note the only reason why I read this is because I have nothing else to do at the time. When are we leaving the plant btw?

The Mc is asexual

You can pretty much compare this to all of the trash isekai manga that gets shitted out a Japanese mangaka’s ass. The main character is straight up asexual, plus you don’t even need to read the story to understand that, all you have to do is read the tags and see that the romance tag is completely missing. Honestly it’s funny to see how most people who read novels on here are so blind to the fact that they are paying money for garbage. I would also not be surprised if most reviewers are spam or bots.

This dude is a clown

I get banned on discord for calling the author new titles of his ‘new webtoons’ dumb. LOL. Massive ego author. Anyway the newest chapter are pretty much filler.

The entire story felt like a face slapping montage followed by overpowered training arc that did little to nothing to make it feel impactful.

I spent 5 hours or 137 chapters reading this horrible piece of writing. This land field of a novel is just a glorified face slapping montage for the MC. The characters in the story are not even memorable. The story driving plot point does not exist. The plot is cliche. I lot my mind reading this garbage.