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Honestly first few chapter was pretty good and interesting. You just lost me with all this fallen angel watcher stuff and the stupif one thousand players transport, it just doesn't work. I usually rate Overlord fanfic high but this one is mehhh LLLL

At least make him a likeable and charismatic villain character and not just straight up scum. I get that it is the "The Boys" show but come on. Well I am just tired seeing all this evil MC and wanted a breath fresh of air. I would not recommend this if you hate gory stuff and especially R@PE. Overall I'll give it a 3/5, story is fun it is just the fact the mc is unlikable for me. WOULD NOT READ AGAIN

This is probably one of the most refreshing fanfic I've read for a long time, compare it to those typical edgy harem bs. Character has a very likable personality and the plot is good. The idea of Ghidorah in a DxD verse is so badass, just imagining him reaching his final form and battle it out with Ophis is anticipating. Although a little bit fast paced (for me I guess), it is still understanble. Overall I will give it a 5/5

Man this novel is CLAPPED, the grammar really needs to be improve. I can not immerse myself to the story because of how difficult it is to understand the sentences. I've read your Zeus novel I'm only at chapter 21 and its getting to taxing to read further because of how awful it is. I hope you don't get offended by this, my opinion on this novel might change so if it improves I will right another review!

I am having a blast reading this story and helps me past time whenever I am bored. I really like the fact that every character feels more real rather than a character who are just existing and I like the every interaction between characters, especially the conversation between David and Dick. I also like the fact that David feels more vulnerable whenever he is struggling mentally and fighting against his demons. I don't know why people gets mad at David being "weak" but for me I was able to relate to him and understand that he was once a regular human and suddenly finding himself on this world, makes feel more human. That is all I want to say, hoping for the good health of the author. PS: Sorry if there is any grammar mistakes, English is not my first language.

Bro please fix your early chapters its terrible. I can not really immerse myself to the story because of how taxing it it to read a whole paragraph with a horrible grammar.