Daniiiiiiiiiiiiiii

1yr

Commented

CALM DOWN BRUH

"I shall have your blood boy." He growled. I couldn't help but sigh. There's no way Dustan is going to avoid his death now.

Who Said I was a Princess?

Fantasy · Ellaine_DT

Daniiiiiiiiiiiiiii

1yr

Commented

Is there really something like that?

I tossed him one of my sabers. "I'll teach you the simplest move you can do with a saber. It's a move that require much skill. And, I think it rather suits your disposition. Truthfully, I like to use it as my finishing move. It's a one-hit guaranteed K.O. technique that even beginners can do."

Who Said I was a Princess?

Fantasy · Ellaine_DT

Daniiiiiiiiiiiiiii

2yr

Posted

Awesome read! Even though the author isn't really updating as much, I see potential!! I like how Kari gives off this mysterious vibe. It really gets you thinking. But, I think the character designs could use a little work. The world background could also use some improvements. I was a little lost at first. Since it's still in the early stages of writing, I hope the author works hard on improving these little details.