Webnovel Author: JulyFantasy - Novel Collection

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I liked the mix of humor and action, makes the story quite enjoyable to read. Quite keen to find out why Damien is so lazy and what might happen to his future. Now I really feel like eating pork cutlet…and looking forward to more chapters soon!

The story is quite captivating and had a good start to capture readers. Been reading several chapters and so far, I think the plot is good and I’m actually keen to find out what happens in reality while the protagonist is immersed in the game. I liked that you didn’t start with the usual (someone died and just entered the game, etc) but took some time to establish the characters and setting. Think this would be a refreshing read for people who enjoy this genre!

The set up of the worlds and characters are very well done! It got me hooked right from the start. The author really knows how to craft the story. I’ve always enjoyed magic related stories and this would be one of them too!

The language is outstanding with vivid descriptions that paints the world for you. There are also lots of unexpected events as you read on. What I also liked about it is that the story isn’t cliche, and the characters are well defined. You’d want to keep on reading to find out more about the world. Looking forward to more chapters!