Badges 9
Moments 8
Your mom was a human you’re is a contraction of you are…the grasp of the English language is awful so many grammatical mistakes and I haven’t made it through the first chapter
Even you're mom was human before we mated and then i turned her into a she wolf and she conceive you.It's the reason why we have keep our bloodline passed on the immunity to silver!
The King Alpha’s Mate
Fantasy · jengreyy
Not what the witches have fortold and.. you are to be married to a human not into
"Find you're Luna Jack! Don't waste time engaging yourself with worthless she wolves. They are not what our relied witches have told. You are to be married into a human to continue the gift of our Royal bloodline." What you need is a human mate who is immune to silver as your future queen."
The King Alpha’s Mate
Fantasy · jengreyy
Was Standing in the foyer present tense. Or Xavier stood in the foyer is also correct..
As soon as I walked in Xavier was stood in the foyer, arms crossed over his chest, a frown marking his beautiful features.
The Alpha King
Fantasy · chillnutella
Seriously this girl needs to stop her piss poor pity me routine. She sounds like a toddler throwing a temper tantrum.
I pushed at his chest and he moved away from me. I almost whimpered at the loss of contact.
The Alpha King
Fantasy · chillnutella
Padded to the kitchen is the correct phrasing
I couldn't be bothered with makeup or rings or anything like that so I just patted downstairs and into the kitchen.
The Alpha King
Fantasy · chillnutella
Reserve the first dance
“I would’ve thought that you’d receive the first dance for the winner.” He shrugged like he couldn’t believe she could be so thoughtless.
The Last Luna
Fantasy · ID Johnson
Get in the way
Damon's lips lifted into a mocking grin. "Did your duties got in the way of your time with Maya?"
The Alpha's Bride
Fantasy · RedSonia