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this seems like chat GPT

ch 0 1 The Reincarnated Assassin: Unraveling the Game of Thrones

Morningstar House (GOT)

Morningstar House (GOT)

Book&Literature · AERIC35

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this is inconsistent one minute you say he's swordsman ship is unparalleled thrn you say it has no finess.your righting is good and grammar is on poiny but you have some plot holes.

He swung his sword recklessly, attempting to strike me with his fiery onslaught. Internally, I scoffed at his lack of finesse, swiftly employing the Twenty-four Gale Steps to gracefully evade his attack.

TBATE | Descent of a God

TBATE | Descent of a God

Book&Literature · WhiteDeath16

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first question is this going to be a harem fic, i ask this because i despise harem. Bot only is it unrealistic but after the harem thing begins the stlry only revolvs around that. second question, this one is mpre of a request, every maincharacter these days is a forced antihero could you and i put emphasis on the COULD. Pleas make a decent mc thats smart also not a beta if someone messes with him he'll destroy them. and last but surtanly not least, can you make the mc not hate rhaenyra but not like her in the sense that lets be honest here rhaenyra is not fit to become queen the knly reason she wants the throne is because it was the only thing she could hold on to after her father basicaly started a new fammily. thanks for listening or reading rant and also good luck.

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bruh realy

I paused for a moment, considering my words carefully. "The price is that you will never be able to feel pleasure ever again unless I allow it. Do you think that's a fair deal, Cersei Lannister?"

Tinkering With Life (GoT SI)

Tinkering With Life (GoT SI)

TV · elfon

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nah bro you f up i told you shouldn't have done that

With a heavy sigh, I turned my gaze to the left, where the source of my vexation lay sprawled naked in my bed, still unconscious. Memories of the previous night flooded my mind.

Tinkering With Life (GoT SI)

Tinkering With Life (GoT SI)

TV · elfon

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dude this is absolutely insane this could become one of the best game of thrones fanfictions when are we going to see a new chapter.

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