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Pretty cringe, not much more i can say honestly. has potential but the mc's feelings make 0 sense, it just feels really forced and abnormal.

I read the first 5 chapters and already dropped it. Some might say it's too little time to give a proper review, but i disagree, since my main problem with this can be found in the first chapter. This writing feels wrong. Is the author trying to be serious or not? he's making giant paragraphs of text that are just a monologue and trying to put funny things inside it. Aditionally, its just straight up annoying to see those "-eh, -huh" in between words, which are things you would only find in anime, nothing that is ever going to sound real. This feels like it could develop well but im not going to torture myself and sit through all this dogshit dialogue because the author can't write properly. I could accept it if this was a comedy series, but that is clearly not what this it. Something about the way its written just feels off but i cant exactly put my finger on it. TLDR: Writing feels wrong, author thinks he is funny, paragraphs too long and unintresting, sometimes serious sometimes sorta comedic but with no logic behind it (and with bad "comedy).

Looks good and has potential, unfortunately, the webnovel authors have changed recently and started thinking that they are funny and can convey strong emotions by using uppercase letters. You are not funny, and these jokes in your novel feel forced and only serve to ruin the flow of what could be a good story. I am tired of 20-30 year old authors trying to make funny conversations between a young protagonist and an old man. Please stop using "old fart", i cant take it anymore. Moreover, making giant paragraphs of uppercase letters where the protagonist gives a shitty speech that no human being could ever sit trough without laughing at its absurdity is also pretty terrible. If only the author didnt pander to 13 year old humour. other than that, the world seems pretty intresting with a cool system.

This had a lot of potential at the start, with the VR world background and all, and it was fun to see the MC get the legendary class. However, this forced comedy and plot simply ruin what could be a good novel. The MC is dumb, unfunny, and unlikeable. The off the game parts of the story are just terrible, and it does is waste time. If that was not enough, the MC is somehow able to kill level 40 field bosses as a low level character that has not distributed his stats? how does that make any sense? i understand that the class is supposed to be OP, but this is just a little too stupid. However, this might just be because of a lack of explanation on the stats and power system of the world, so its not too bad. This novel would be much better if the advancement of the plot felt more natural and if the author would just stop forcing terrible, nonsensical 9year old level comedy. Hope the author can realize how unfunny these jokes are. Sorry for bad england, engleesh not first language.

Characters are boring, dialogue is terrible and the grammar is even worse. Whenever he starts writing in all caps to make the MC sound angry (i think? only reason i could think of) it just looks terribly cringe and edgy. Had potential, but all characters are so bland that its like eating good looking food that has absolutely no spice or taste.

I had to log in to my account just to post this review because i was fucking malding after reading this. I cannot with this fucking protagonist. everything bad that happens is his fault because he is an incompetent piece of shit. Like letting that noble girl and her butler leave after hearing that she would rat out "lisa" or whatever her real name is. He simply let them go back, only stopped them when it was already too late and because of what? because he is an indecisive piece of shit who can't make a decision in less than 100 years. Or when he felt some weird aura coming from the beast-guy's coffin and just shrugged it off. What a surprise it was then when that guy just popped out from the coffin and managed to take hyesi and a bunch of innocent people down with him. I cannot with this fucking character. If his IQ wasnt so similar to room temperatures this novel would be over in 200 chapters. If you ignore the terrible protagonist and his semi-inexistent character development (he kind of changes, but he just becomes sort of apathetic and still ends up commiting the same mistakes 1000 times), this novel is actually great, which is what makes it all the more of a tragedy when you realise that you have to get used to that POS good for nothing MC just to enjoy the system and the universe in general.