Does this relate to your other novel?
ch 79 The Oracle (2)
Fantasy · EG0
I’m starting to lean towards Sophie ngl
ch 168 Actually, I'm a bit envious of Angel and Sophie
Urban · Cadwaladr
Sam!!!
ch 161 Whether I live or die is for you to decide now
Urban · Cadwaladr
Look how he balances on one foot
...Wait, But combining those two is like trying to kick a ball using only one foot.
Fantasy · NightGLE_WN
Please 🙏 Keep her as a sister and nothing more
However... in Sam's view, such a thing would never happen, not ever.
Urban · Cadwaladr
She is my favorite one rn the worst one is Zoe imo
Sam didn't want his family to lose their peace and potentially be put in danger because of him. After all, Angel didn't seem to be a kind-hearted heiress, and the consequences were unpredictable.
Urban · Cadwaladr
Sam is pretty OP compared to the average person just that female leads are crazy strong
Sam shook his head and then flashed a brilliant smile. "I just think it's absurd that you consider me your enemy... And even more absurd that you can't deal with me. That's all."
Urban · Cadwaladr
Omg the system actually helped him
[Ding! Based on the host's conquest progress, a special skill is awarded!]
Urban · Cadwaladr
Isabella is going to be a great addition
ch 75 Plan successful
Urban · Cadwaladr
Would have been better to use the heartbreak excuse 😭
"I just fell off the bed and hit my head on the floor." I initiated a lie to mask the truth of my transmigration into this world.
Urban · AGodAmongMen
The mother feels to childish and the conversation feels to one sided at beginning some dialogue feels forced but most of it is fine
This is my first time I'm writing an older character and I would like to know from you guys how the interactions are. Like if they are decent, natural, forced or cringey.
Urban · AGodAmongMen
Unpopular opinion I like the way the story is being written it’s also kinda necessary for the story to be written this way if the plot is going to be any good
The house I was in was rather big and looked quite modern, with a simple but elegant design and decorations all around it. It had one floor and looked to be a western-style house that had an adult touch to it. Although I wouldn't say that it looked like a mansion, it was still a house that looked like it could only be bought by people in the upper middle class.
Urban · AGodAmongMen
I get this probably the original talking instead of the guy that took over but man you know she is gonna fall for another guy rn your main focus should be survival also no real explanation has be provided why the original feels this way besides them being childhood sweethearts
'I know it's not a game, but I don't want to take chances,' I replied, closing my eyes. 'I...I don't want her to die.'
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
Do they actually know everything? Like him talking to himself and the tree?
"You didn't think that you were actually free, right?" She replied, with a hint of amusement in her voice. "There wasn't a single second that you were out of our reach, and there isn't a thing that you have done that we don't know."
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
Thats a really dumb deal on his predecessor part but a Genius part from his mother really good writing
Not even half a year is left, and even when in the game she gave me an extra six months to prove myself, I failed, and in the end, I became her puppet.
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
Honestly at this point what kinda of person wouldn’t want to just destroy everything she build if they were in the position of her son? If I was the mc I would just try to ruin everything she worked for
ch 14 When death stares... do not be afraid. [4]
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
If his personality changed wouldn’t he be a completely different person? At that point wouldn’t he become a different than the person she fell in love with?
"Even if your body changes, even if your personality changes, I will still love you."
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
I hope it doesn’t relate just that you are reusing similar concepts
ch 79 The Oracle (2)
Heaven's Greatest Professor
Fantasy · EG0