Is he gonna be a simple but calculative character if so i cant wait(similar to an authors pov0.
ch 0 6 The Hero's Gate part 2: Chapter 5
Urban · Simple_Thought
he cleaned his room so did he ever read the letters? i mean obviously it's someone that cares about him never really specified about it in the chapter before wondering if your gonna introduce later later in the story. Still dont know power dymanics or much about the world yet. Is it on purpose? are you going to introduce world building little by little like your doing now or wait until hes in the royal academy to have the intructors "teach" aka world build from there. like are there ranks for skills is there mana what makes a hero a hero, i hope the main character isnt superly righteous i mean hes supposed to unprincipled so whatever works.
Two days has passed and right now I was making my way to a Theme park. The only Theme park open right Now was the "Sundale Funpark". It was 20 minutes by bus and an hour if I decided to jog there....but I wasn't going to do that.
Urban · Simple_Thought
You broke off from the cliche where the main novel starts way later, instead hes a year late it makes me curious how your gonna intregrate the main character with the protag or if your not at all? will the main character be a sideliner like in the shadows, or directly helping the protag, or maybe neither where the protag and the simple man barely rarely meet? since its a year later im honestly enjoying that
ch 0 3 How should I go on with this? chapter 2
Urban · Simple_Thought
Her? or rather here? or you?
"Thank you sister Catherine, if ever I would need a blessing again, I'll come visit her."
Urban · Simple_Thought
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 A Twist Ending
Fantasy · Herolich
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 I am repaying my debts!
Fantasy · MelonSmasher
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 I am repaying my debts!
Fantasy · MelonSmasher
See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
ch 0 1 College Life Sucks
Fantasy · Resurgent
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 College Life Sucks
Fantasy · Resurgent
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 College Life Sucks
Fantasy · Resurgent
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 0 1 College Life Sucks
Fantasy · Resurgent
I was half expecting han to be a villian instead of treating him as his master? Like Han being self concious the entire time and letting things play out and he enjoys it since he's the main character and getting their attention so i was half expecting to Han wake up confused and some what angry that he slept with 2 of them(literally not sexually)
ch 51 It is the second day.
I Started To Gain Sentience In An Eroge
Realistic · Parmesan