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Watch out overuse of slight/slightly. Great stuff you you are writing!!
ch 15 | 15 | Internal Force
Did I Forget to Mention I'm the Vice Guild Master?
Fantasy · Evil_Moray
One of them (not if) 🙂
Andrew didn't think he could get more surprised, but oh how fate proved him wrong. " ... You lucky son of a-! ... You have a dual affinity! Moreover, one if them is already at Tier 2!"
Beast's Malice
Fantasy · Evil_Moray
Beast (not beats)
'I was fighting that beats! where did it-!'
Beast's Malice
Fantasy · Evil_Moray
Great twist!
ch 0 -20 23 2AM Snack Gets Interupted by a Hybrid...
Beast's Malice
Fantasy · Evil_Moray
First sentence does not make sense
He had never seen the metal the buildings were made out of. His job was to investigate, so he placed his hand on the building. The moment he touched the metal, he had a shock.
Beast's Malice
Fantasy · Evil_Moray
Died to it?
'Those ants are truly foolish, to be experimenting on something like that... it was no wonder why all but one died to it...'
Beast's Malice
Fantasy · Evil_Moray
Excellent writing that translates into vibrant visualization of the world this author has created. I am looking forward to the rest of the story! Great work and keep it up!
Did I Forget to Mention I'm the Vice Guild Master?
Fantasy · Evil_Moray