maybe event = drop, event in fight or trigger special quest ( % in a database ) and cc, because it's stats ( hidden for cc ) it's % but not a trigger but a pure number, math
i read 30 chapter but i can't continue. good idea for the story but the same problem with 90% of story with clone. the clone have more screen time than the mc they heve more development, more socialize, more personality znd just do more than the MC and the MC, if we resume, do nothing he don't have character développement because for the start of this story he just hide and lie to all poeple. with he screen time he is more of a side character or an excuse to have character of other manga in this fanfiction. and because the MC it's not write like a MC, i can't continue to read. sorry
in the story hand sign can power up the soul skill. oscar do this to and maybe you have reference with aizen in bleach with black coffin or maybe naruto with ice kekkai
Under Yu Xiaomen's horrified gaze, Lin Hanye crossed his little finger, thumb, and ring finger, and put his index and middle fingers together, and formed a strange handprint with his right hand.
Douluo: Simulate Life On Every Ring
Anime & Comics · FictionOP
the story and the writing is good, but before you read this story, you need to know that it's a very slow and a very info dump ( 75% of chapter ). this it's a major default of this story, not for the building of the story but for the quality time of the reader. because the author want to explain the development of the mc but hidding his full power for his hidden agenda. you will read the over development of his allie. ( with all the chapter more than 60% of the writing it's monologue or explaination of trainning and development of his friends ). even in figthing, the monologue and explaination broke the hype of action. maybe this will change in the future when all the background and the base of the story will be writing. but you need to know that for this fanfiction you will read more about other perso than the mc
again. you write a super action duel game with a combo for the suprise to annihilate pegasus and then you use a card for cheating ( gain life after the draw ) then again the card draw it's the perfect card ( strong plot armor ). i like this story but your use cheat and plot armor destroy all possibility of a good duel because all strategic or brainstorming or combo resume with " oh i'm lucky, yes the author want the chapter to continue so use the chating abuse super strong plot armor"
sorry i need to say it. BULLSHIT. So, i like this story and i love the développement but i have exactly the same dislike than yugi oh anime. she need a defeat ok good but using the super mega plot armor ( cheating abuse because kaiba have all the card to counter the unknow hero deck) it just the wrong chose because when i read this i don't see a lose but a strong forcing plot. i will continue to read this story because it's a good story. i just needed to tell this
scam no chapter just some in the beginin that all. after it just chapter for unlock chapter with money on his patreon
thank you for this chapter and thank you for not going for the drama path again
if this continue with the self blame, loathing and this emotionnal shit with no developpement. i will stop reading. i can't continue with a story with more than 40 chapter with only the only développement is drama and drama and more drama with self destruct mentality
it's always the same, "god" want to invade but can't do directly because of rule and miracle they can do more and more action just because the MC is powerful so forget the rule
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Games · BigWhiteGoose