Don't take to heart my comments . If I am not good in imagination in reading . Your story is bit scattered point of view . Maybe you can give some hint which part the reality, the flashbacks and the imagination . Hope my comments can help you
ch 0 4 Realization
Fantasy · 7inkz_etls
Maybe auto spell using the author while typing the word. Instead of see it's sea meaning same sounds but different spelling and different meaning...
ch 45 Ch 45: Evil Spirit
Fantasy · Carefree_Dream
I put my self with this comment to have good flow of every turn of events
Eastern · Smiling Demon
For me I think 1st Parul and second maybe new beautiful girls ...
ch 13 A new discovery and being lovey-dovey
Fantasy · Sheizzcoldasice
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 321 Can He Be Trusted?
Eastern · MyLittleBrother
I hope this story give more motivation to read more novels in this series and more importantly that I can make it possible for me to use this
Games · Whiteday
The flow of the story have enough to attract the attention of the readers. I hope more interesting twist will be on. Thank you for your story help pass time.
Eastern · Sand Storm
Give more, I like it. ............................. ........................... ......................................... .....................
Eastern · Fifty Fifty Master
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ch 0 1 Rebirth
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Don't take to heart my comments . If I am not good in imagination in reading . Your story is bit scattered point of view . Maybe you can give some hint which part the reality, the flashbacks and the imagination . Hope my comments can help you
ch 0 4 Realization
My Lust Booster System
Fantasy · 7inkz_etls