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At least Ryuki is the real villain in the original story, and not the poor bastard whom everyone looks down on.

Another "villain" who cannot kill the enemy because luck will prevent it, but can steal the chance that for some reason luck allows you to do.

Yes, I say that it is a rare villainous novel that explains these things intelligently.

Most authors simply do not hesitate to send all the female heroines to the harem of a false hero, as a result, the main character does not look like a villain, but rather a cuckold from whom brides, sisters and subordinate women are stolen. You have no big problems with this, at least the women who were initially close to the main character did not betray him and did not become the harem of the sons of luck in the original version. But some heroines are disgusted because of their behavior in the "false future". I hope the author will continue to omit these details that do not affect the main plot.

This is a good explanation for the "original" plot. But I hope that the author will abuse it less in the future. Some heroines look extremely disgusting because of this (a vampire who kills her sister and enslaves her race, a rich daughter who betrays her brother and family) in any case, reading how they were a harem of sons of fortune is unpleasant even if it is a false future. You can just omit such details.

The author has removed the poisonous trap of rebirth very well. I sometimes thought that the heroines would get memories of life in the "original plot" and this simple explanation solved this mystery.

I really hope that the villain here is not another useless trash without talent who is bullied and intimidated by others. Such "Villains" are very frustrating.

She had no respect for the prince's status, she said to his face that she did not trust him. She is the ultimate beauty and naturally could assume that he is greedy for her body, certainly trust as a childhood friend should be more than a few words from a stranger. The villagers just lost their spirits, this is the best way to prove his lie. About luck, you, as the author, must decide for yourself what it can affect and how it should work, but in addition to the direct ban on killing, you can come up with many more interesting reasons for extending the life of the son of fate from earning points to receiving many awards for the complete devastation of luck.

His mother, who arranged an escort for her son, cannot be unaware of this, if there are spies of other forces among them, they also found out about it. He just gives others a reason to attack themselves. Using your status as a prince to wean other people's souls like a petty crook is very shameful behavior. Once this is inevitably revealed, it should destroy his reputation beyond repair.

As in many villainous novels, luck works very strangely for you. The main character slandered the son of luck in front of his girlfriend with a primitive lie. At the first meeting, daughter luck believes the slander of the villain, and completely ignores a friend she has known for many years. Luck does not react to this in any way. But having a total advantage in strength, he does not dare to take action. You just beat him to death at the meeting without giving him a word to say. And that luck will help a lot? How does it work?

2. He had a huge variety of ways to do this, to simulate accidental absorption in bouts of strong emotions, to write off a random epiphany in a dream, a meeting with an immortal, any of these options will be much better than the one that was written by you. What's wrong with him? To everyone. I will list the most basic problem. Anyone interested (the emperor, mother, etc.) can trace the obvious connection between the prince's trip, the loss of spirits from the inhabitants and the appearance of power from the MC, this should already cause unnecessary problems, at this moment the mother understands that the MC has to hide a lot from her, and could well harbor resentment at such distrust, besides the obvious The changes are sure to arouse greed and suspicion from others. The MC even awakens the second spirit and pursues the true disciple of the sect master within the empire. What kind of secrecy and restraint can we talk about after that?

1.Disclosure of the MC Replacement. The chances of exposing the Main character of his mother are extremely small, here are the reasons: the body, memory and soul were transferred perfectly by the system, so I can not imagine what problems he could face, on the contrary, his actions were the most ridiculous completely dictated by the needs of the plot in isolation from all logic. Instead of getting along with his loving mother, of whom he has a memory, he went to deceive the disabled villagers, takes a mistress and does many other things that were not peculiar to the prince before, and all this in front of people assigned by his mother (or someone else). Do you really not see a problem in the actions of the main character?

The presenter is a real idiot and hasn’t made a single adequate decision in his new life. Although it is clear that he is the main character of this novel with plot armor and nothing serious will happen to him, I hope that in the future the author will adapt and such absurdity will not happen.

It seems that this whole farce was necessary for the main character to meet the heroine and the son of luck. Unfortunately, this is another disappointment, instead of using his superior status as a prince to suppress the son of fortune and capture the heroine, the protagonist relies on his “intelligence-reducing halo” and the heroine, wary of him, blushes because of a couple of frivolous words, the son of fortune is easily slandered and despised .

It seems that the main one has no plans to hide his strength. But then his actions are even more ridiculous, he came to the village with his reputation as a prince to deceive the residents and absorb their garbage spirits, if you do not destroy the entire village and kill the companions, then it will be very easy for interested parties to understand the connection between the disappearance of souls from the villagers and improving it from the prince. All this could have been avoided if he had told everything to his mother, and she, using her power, easily gave him the required amount of spirits.

Although it’s too early to judge based on one chapter, I like the character shown, reminiscent of a real villain.

I'm just constantly confused by what's going on, but I don't worry too much. After all, I understand that no matter what happens, the main character has hidden powers and everything goes according to his ideal plan, which readers will not be privy to for complete intrigue.

Although I like the novel itself, I am irritated by the excessive mystery and the small amount of information about the events taking place. For example: the main character talks about the importance of Emma but no details, she is simply seduced with a couple of offers and she disappears for many chapters, also the hero provokes the killer without any explanation or preparation, in the end she was defeated and somehow convinced to do something. All these dubious operations are confusing and interfere with immersion in the story; I cannot empathize with the main character and what is happening to him, I simply do not understand what he is faced with, what means he has, and what he is achieving.