PrimordialKai - Profile

Everything is Great personally though I disliked how he is the sole cause for the tensions between him and his brothers. He had the mind of an adult and treated them and held them to the standard a stranger would. The authors really did a good job carry over his past life biases although. 5 stars for realism I guess. It’s went from pettiness to outright hatred. Very frustrating when I could see the many ways the relationship could be mediated. At least when they were young. By the time he became a teen that ship sailed. After all he was already an adult mentally, the rapport was soured, by this time has already est himself in that world also.

Impeccable writing that’ll leave you in awe!

Recommendation for better story with similar themes ?

Recommendation for better story with similar themes?

Recommendations for a better story, that may have similar concepts and themes

The story is enjoyable because I’ already invested in the path the mc is walking and the final outcomes There could have been more explanation on the mechanics of the magic system, from runes, potions, even how spell casting works, it’s dexterity, means of control. A couple paragraphs here and there could have tied that up succinctly One of the biggest plot holes is his family. I loved when they introduced the love interst and things moved along quick. But after that the Wilson household complete disappear from the story. He’s essentially a deadbeat. The story move one and majority of his time is spent as a solo adventure, climb, I love that no one is weighing him down but the relationships are all fleeting.