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I like this one but I think it needs a bit of refinement. Get back to ODIN!!

Seems like this ain’t been updated in a while. I’m bored so I’m just writing some suggestions. Despite the flaws I like the story and the supposed big picture it’s brewing. Possibly goblins being descended from dwarves and elves descended from house-elf or due to some historical reason that their races most powerful foresaw a future event like magic decline etc and chose to change their forms and go into hiding because of some events in the past or future. Possible alliances between races of vampires, elves, gobline(dwarves.) MC could advance the magical world after helping kill Voldy. Becomes wealthy, influential and powerful to unite human wizards and reform it. Powerful enough to let each race establish their own homes through terra formation on different planets. Establishment of new laws and organisations across planets. MC personal goals - make a grimoire, world’s biggest personal library, Newt Scamader magical creature case, Greenhouse of magic plants, house like Doctore Who Time Machine.

I really like this novel. It’s my first time actually commenting seriously. So far everything has been enjoyable to read apart from the thought of threatening the author to update more😜. The update sequence is on time and I’d appreciate if we could have more background information such as different places in the wizarding world. Introducing events not in the canon could add twist. Thank you for this novel despite my selfishness.