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started great, but later on become boring cause of some of the plot armour for the antagonist come annoying

this novel really had a bunch of up and down. sometimes arc is so good to be missed, and sometimes its boring as hell. like what happened in latest chapters. man his motivation to only kill all the trash ranker is stupid af.

*this review is made during chapter 328* pros: 1. i like this book, author even make a story before our mc here is reincarnated, which is rare (other books simply does not bother to do that). 2. world building is good, so many branch of stories and background characters that can be use to spice up story in the future. 3. grammer is okay for me, english is not my tounge language anyway 4. arc progress is good, no doubt about it. cons: 1. first i said that i like author spent his time writing the background of our mc here before he reincarnated right? but further i saw how the author kind of overboard to do that. especially with his habit of suddenly jumping to an past trauma, or past memmories that happen pretty often. 2. just like the point above, i felt he sometimes 'dramatizer' and often felt a bit cringe. idk if it related to author being an indian that famous for their drama (not being racist here, really). 4. update kinda slow for a while well that said, i think author is doing a good job here for his book. and i hope he can improve too so he can be a great writer. cheer