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Gay .

The story is horrible .the character feel like cardboard with no deepth to them at all .the time skips are horrendous .the POV switching is something else.over all that was a terrible 5 chapters.hopefully the author gets better.

I have another plan, how about: Kill Sasuke, Naruto, Hinata, Kaguya Kimimaro, Karin and the most prominent of all the clans of Konoha and the other four villages, then absorb everyone from the Akatsuki, including Obito and Itachi, Collect all the tailed creatures and resurrect Kaguya, Absorb her, and wait for other Ootsutsuki to come, absorb them and go to another universe

But there are thousands of them and they are not unique, in every parallel universe they exist, but he is the only one, even if one of them dies, there will be others in other universes, so I don’t understand why they are needed for the plot at all? I would just kill and absorb everyone, I don’t see anything important in them, let them die, or are you in love with the main characters?

The author disappointed me in the last chapters, he follows the plot with all his might and does not want to change it, do you know why? Because his dear master Naruto may suffer if he changes the plot even a little, although why give him Daniel's DNA and train him if you are so afraid of changing the plot?

You completely disappointed me, wait for a new review, and it’s far from good

The novel's idea is pretty good, but the events leading up to Minato's death, despite the MC knowing about the future, are not well executed. I don't have problems with Minato still dying despite the MC trying his best to stop that from happening (in fact, it almost felt like he gave up on saving his parents halfway through the story), but just the fact that the MC actually tried to change that event from happening only a few days before Naruto's birth, and that too by telling Minato and Kushina that he is having nightmares of them dying due to nine tails when Naruto is born, is a really poor execution. The MC felt a suspicious presence spying on them from time to time after Kushina was in the later stages of her pregnancy, and he didn't even tell Jiraiya or Hiruzen so one or both of them could attend the event to ensure everything went okay. This would have been way easier to explain because of the uzumaki heritage (Mind's Eye of the Kagura), rather than the abysmal attempts at explaining the nightmares of future events. One of the events that irked me the most was that MC saying that he completely forgot about the masked man attacking because of seeing his mother in pain during childbirth (bruh, the entire reason you even begged your parents to allow you to accompany them during Naruto's birth was so that you could do something to prevent your parents from dying, and you completely forgot about it literally 2 seconds before the event was going to happen??). The fact that the MC, who isn't even as skilled as a Genin, thought he could prevent his parent's death by hindering Obito's plans a little bit is completely absurd and makes the MC seem stupid (if anything, you will only get in Minato's way because then he will need to protect you as well). Even the interaction of the MC with Team Minato was so minimal that it felt really lacking. The MC was able to save Kushina, so that's a big plus, and he also finally seriously wants to get stronger now, so I am looking forward to how the story develops from here on out. For those who read my comment, I would recommend reading the story. Although not all the execution was good, the idea of the story itself is pretty good and makes me look forward to seeing how the fic develops. I might come back later to edit my review after more chapters are released.