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This Webnovel is unique and has many things that need to be explored, but it seems you haven't settled on who's gonna be the MC of this Webnovel which made me confused too as this Webnovel seems to be still on the prologue stage, even though I can see that the Main Plot is near.

The title looks intriguing, but the MC's character had no development or those things since it is only five chapters. I really do hope the MC grows for he seems to be so motivated to do this for his granddaughter even though his powers made me confused.

I will definitely pay more if the chapters are where Donovan is in his OP state but it seems that you are intending to take your time to explore Donnie's childhood which is good since this is the main selling point, right author?

This is a problem for me, but still, I really think that the <Twelve Eyes of Time> concept was so very abstract since it seems that you tried to hide its true extent of powers. Although, I still wonder how it keeps warning the MC of some events like the current chapter that I just read. By the way, the zero volume is still the best volume regarding this story since it goes to the point where the main character does his thing which gives me more interesting questions about whether the MC should be judged or not ... But still, I felt that the main plot seems to reveal more things too early for some reason as if the pace is getting faster even though I thought it was a slow paced.

An MC that is very young in age but already works in order to feed himself in a rich school is a unique one but it seems you've decided to make the MC strong first in order for him to have a triumphant return. But still, even though this Reboot Webnovel is going to be fast pacing, the previous MSPLU has a lot of explanations regarding how the MC had his power which is very long to read. Please let this comment, be your advice author.

The character seems to have slow development, but this is quite a fresh origin story even though I must say that this looks like MHA but still, the MC really put up quite a fight rather than being a very weak MC in the mainstream media and I like the concept of the MC of helping their family by side working despite friends teasing, it is a good concept.

This Webnovel is unique since the character that transmigrated doesn't receive any systems or some sort but learns magic from a being inside his body. The story is straightforward for some reasons and I must say there are sometimes twists that shocked me and it seems you really wanted this to be the side story of your other Webnovel right? ... the one that will be rebooted. Well then continue your work.

I see the story as I try to skip the chapters you recommended, I see where is this going an OP School MC but with MHA type school. Still, the main plot story was still short and somehow there are some callbacks that I need to see from the previous long chapters just to make it sense. But Overall, this Webnovel is quite good for an original story, a superhero student but with a delinquent attitude just like Bakugo, not Deku.

It seems that the more I read it the more I can see that you wanted to make your Leveling Story different than the others. Also as a 'superhero' novel I maybe see just a glimpse of its heroism but the Superhero names are quite cool and fresh. By the way keep up the good work,