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I think a training montage, would be nice.

Great chapter, I'm enjoying this story.

Great chapter, thanks. I liked the interactions between the trio.

Great chapter. I enjoyed this one the most so far, especially with the slight info dumps you gave, makes a lot of things I was unsure about make sense. I noticed on third paragraph, second line you said "pantses" I think plural is still pants. Thanks for chapter, this one felt more exciting. But I might just like fighting.

Great chapter. I'm excited to see him fight, this will be the first proper fight we see. Cam Han Jin and Fatty Wan not cultivate at all, or do they just have bad cultivation talent? Thanks.

Great chapters, very interesting. I binged all 28 chapters. I'm looking forward to more.

I understand that's an erotic scene ,but isn't that too much? Bleeding like that over naked women, that's anime over reaction .But he's only 8, even if he has mentality of older guy and even that perk ,he still shouldn't be that horny. But whatever do your thing I suggest tone down reactions like that

Try to write the jutdu names properly if you can, makes it confusing or just annoying if not.

At least try to use the proper character names it's very confusing without that

Thanks can't wait for more

I had really high hopes for this story, but I'm sorry I'm not enjoying the story at all, the Mc is over dramatic for my tastes and gives a very annoying interaction between other characters. Good work writing stories is hard. Cheers I'm out.

Thanks can't wait for more.

Really good chapter can't wait for more hope you update faster but thanks.

Maybe give him king of God's ancient gods eye.

Thanks for chapter

Great chapter, can't wait for more! Is this a translation? Give original name if it is. Thanks.