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The story is getting more barren and there is no longer some world development from the recent chapters unlike the zero volume, but still, the main problem is, why is Rangga Twelve, the person that is shown in the prologue is not the Main Character of this story but his so-called his current Timeline self that seems to not having Carla as hid granddaughter yet which makes it so confusing....

I must say author, I think you must continue this story even though there are some things that are too hard for me to understand as I really need more insight of what is going on.

The relationship of the MC with the Deviant is torturous but at least you gave the MC the chance to fight back while the Deviant tries many ways to keep him in her control unlike many who just submit to the girl master MC. Even greater, you also gave the servant MC the chance to cheat on his master in the recent chapter, I know this web novel was also meant to be a harem one but the action needs to be fleshed out or otherwise the MVM will not take place. By the way the concept of the Sub-Realm of Tartarus is still kinda confused me. But it is an interesting story.

I only see some parts of your story, it seems rushed maybe since you want your MC to be OP but it's okay ... I like OP MC's and also some OP characters too but please don't rushingly kill them okay and please If you going to kill them please give them at lease some meaning. And also keep up the chapters and the covers, I really loved the covers and this Novel's logo .. that's the thing that attracted me