This was poorly written, very confusing. The chapters continued to introduce the main character. You are writing from John view ,then from Eleanor veiw
ch 21 mix ( Elenore)
Fantasy · Reveries_
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ch 24 Meeting Ji Hui
Urban · Mountain Springs
The Doctor has an over-active imagination
ch 18 The Young Lady Was Daring
General · Curling Green Smoke
I'm really enjoying this novel Author please stop repeating the ending of each paragraphs in the next chapter.Story line beautiful and very enjoyable but again repeating and explaining same situation
ch 24 What Really Happened?
Urban · jennakim
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
This was poorly written, very confusing. The chapters continued to introduce the main character. You are writing from John view ,then from Eleanor veiw
ch 21 mix ( Elenore)
The Villain's Lament
Fantasy · Reveries_