This story is in its very early days, so there is not much to be said as of yet. With that in mind, the first chapter is written well, and it flows nicely. The opening of the second chapter is quite jarring, and not exactly in a good way, due to the writing being a good bit clunkier than before. However, this is something that improves with time and experience. Good luck, author. I'll be glad to give this another look in the future.
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This made me laugh
'At least my fatigue is high', Seung Jin thought, and then his profile left and another context showed up.
Fantasy · Gebe
This novel is very well written, and certainly has an interesting premise. personally, I'd find it hard to love someone after being sold into slavery, but I'm interested enough to see how Purple decides to go about this. The only issues with the story have to do with weak word choice and minor grammatical errors, though none of them are bad enough that they can't be fixed within ten-fifteen minutes.
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Easily one of the best stories I've read on WN. Aside from some minor grammar mistakes, I'd say the writing quality is top notch. The plot is quite interesting, and Crim makes for a fun protagonist. I'd really recommend this one.
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Fantasy · Kexer