Sami_Bal - Profile

Hey, I just wanted to give a quick feedback on the previous chapters. So far I find the character development and storyline quite interesting. So far you've been putting out a chapter every day, I hope you keep that stamina and don't stop after a while, that would be a shame. Your writing style isn't the best, but it's definitely not one of the worse ones, I've had much worse experiences there. The only thing that bothers me from time to time are grammatical errors or incorrectly placed quotation marks, but these are small things and you can fix them quickly. Your writing style is otherwise optimal, you try to build up the story nicely with a certain touch of seriousness and above all with humor and I like that very much. Please don't lose your sense of humor here. Thanks so far and keep it up.