Moments 4
Hmmm she seems suspicious to me
"Oh, there's no need to concern yourself with such things," she replied. "Just take care of yourself and get some rest, alright dear?" She smiled sweetly. "There's a guest room down the hallway from this living room. It's behind the sofa you're on. The sheets are clean and there's some space for your belongings," she said, glancing at the bag at my feet. "It's getting late, so I'll be heading upstairs now. Let me know if you need anything, dear."
The Orange Grove
Fantasy · DiamondQueen1011
Ok I like this protagonist >:D
I rolled my eyes and sighed. Little did she know about all of the various jobs I did, trying to scrape together enough money to get out of this place safely. I might have been born into a rich family, and I'll admit, I was a little bit spoiled—but I was nowhere near lazy.
The Orange Grove
Fantasy · DiamondQueen1011
I'm getting Cinderella vibes from this 🤔
Laura had hated me since day one. In fact, I'm almost completely sure that she's the one who spread the rumor about my family being cursed. She claimed that my family was haunted by an evil ghost because we had stolen money from the ghost's family. The other kids built upon her tale—my mother was an evil witch who seduced my father, my father was a crook and a fraud who murdered the ghost's family and stole their money, and more.
The Orange Grove
Fantasy · DiamondQueen1011
This story shows a lot of promise! Even though there isn't a lot out yet, the main character is very lovable and the descriptions/worldbuilding are great. Definitely recommend this one :D
The Orange Grove
Fantasy · DiamondQueen1011