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Ditch one of the selling...
"I still think selling him into selling him into slavery was a tad bit extreme. At the end of the day they are of the same blood" argued a porky servant vehemently
Rise of the Cosmic_Emperor
Eastern · Nate_Quinn
Instance -> insistance
In fact, she stopped calling him master only after his instance but she still couldn't get out of the habit of acting like a maid.
Reborn as God: The strongest system
Fantasy · PillGrandCreator
"empire dogs", empirical means something else.
Since this is a forsaken place by the kingdom it is the perfect place for our family to avoid the empirical dogs.
True King's Ecstasy
Fantasy · ElectricLuna
She did conceal her strength though?
Firia only showed three fireballs in yesterday's match. So he thought he could win since he could use three fireballs too. It had never crossed his mind that Firia hadn't actually concealed her full strength. He felt regretful for underestimating her. He thought he could beat her with his firepower.
Gacha Sovereign
Fantasy · Fixten
How exactly does "tall and straight" breast look? For me that translates into "long and saggy"?
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I Keep Witches While Others Keep Dragons
Fantasy · Xuanting_Official
your're -> your
"Eva it's time to go find you're mom" Arius patted her on the head. [Does this little girl have a crush on me every time she looks at me her face goes red.] He thought to himself silently.
My Three Yandere Wives
Fantasy · Kurupts
stair -> stare?
It was a stair down Arius and the wolf gazed at each other with glares that could kill. Having enough the wolf did another dash towards him at full speed causing the wind to blow around its fur body.
My Three Yandere Wives
Fantasy · Kurupts
Repeating the same word or words, in this case "life span", is rather poor writing. Especially when done in the same paragraph.
"We all have a hundred years of life span and as our rank increases, we can increase our life span. We don't need to give much of our life span. We just need to sacrifice some of our lifespan, so that we can heal him after he wakes up and we can also use other means to sustain his situation after he is saved."
The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
"less" -> "few"
The book had very less pages but Zhan Chen became interested in it after studying it for a while. There was only two weeks remained before his Coming of age ceremony and Zhan Chen wanted to master the techniques written in the book before his coming of age ceremony.
Past life sage: This life a dual cultivator
Eastern · purple_mage
"less" -> "few"
The books stored by the Evil emperor were very less in number but all of the books contained valuable knowledge and supreme techniques. Zhan Chen was aware of it. He stopped his cultivation and decided to enter the space of the mysterious diagram.
Past life sage: This life a dual cultivator
Eastern · purple_mage
It should be "during a rainy night"?
His mind...keeps replaying on a particular scene that he saw in his nightmare. It was the vivid memory when Amanda died on his arms under the disdainful gazes of his enemies, under a rainy night.
Fate Online: Shadow
Games · ApocalypseX
weak -> week
Outside it had been a weak but inside the array it had been Two and a half months (10 weeks), during which he had successfully formed his cosmic pearl which at the early stage was 5cm(1'8) in diameter, and it's purity surpassing that limit and guaranteed he could most probably defeat someone at the mid stage. As for late stage he should be able to escape. His speed and strength had increased along with improvement in his cultivation base. Meanwhile his flesh had surpassed the limit of the mid stage and stood very close to the peak.
Rise of the Cosmic_Emperor
Eastern · Nate_Quinn
he -> him
Hal mentally nodded and this day would be the one that Hal would make the conscious decision to build an eternal reign for the ease and pleasure of he and his women where their words would be law!
Rise of the Cosmic_Emperor
Eastern · Nate_Quinn
bated -> baited
Rad was sweating bullets he knew Hal had bated him to anger but he just could not help it, the instant Rita's name was mentioned, he lost all reason. He also kept recalling the genuine fear he had felt as well as the vision that had instilled that fear, a vision he couldn't explain but had terrified him. The sound of his father taking a deep breath brought him back to the situation at hand
Rise of the Cosmic_Emperor
Eastern · Nate_Quinn
I think "pound" to "pond"?
" Son, as my disciple, you have to complete some tasks before I teach you. Go, make a thatched hut first for me here. After that, you have to make a pound too. Come here. " The man approached Joey, poked his forehead with his finger. After that, a lotus seal appeared on his forehead. It locked Joey's essence and soul force inside his body.
The Invincible Corruption Manual
Eastern · The_handsome_fatty
Chated? Is it just missing a "t" and the author meant chatted? Otherwise I'm stumped...
While eating and drinking, some of them chated, some cracked jokes, while some ate silently.
The Invincible Corruption Manual
Eastern · The_handsome_fatty
Repeated...
The others considered him to be foolishly enthusiastic, and silently laughed at the idea of Apophis serving as a meat shield while they combined all their firepower to kill the lizard at range!
MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God
Games · Hamapo
Was the library used often or not? Double negation says that it's used often, context indicates that it's not.
It took Rain three weeks to read the book, but at least he learned a lot more than he had expected. The library wasn't a place that wasn't used often, so Rain had a lot of peace and quiet there, whereas the rest of the school was so noisy that it looked like the hell broke loose.
Infinite Paths: The Raging Phoenix
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99