Every character is a detailed persona, not just a waste of words. Every action scene, or in general description of images and scenery is almost like watching a slideshow of pictures instead of reading words Great action, Amazing plot twists, Addicting plot.
Fantasy · Junethephatcat
Great chapter
ch 27 First Encounter With The Demons I
Great chapter. So much improvement from the first ten you posted. Keep up the good work!
ch 26 A Day In The Life Of Aurora Lyndell
Great pilot chapter. Very impressive use of words to describe the situation in the opening paragraph. Additionally, it ends the chapter with an intriguing mystery.
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Every character is a detailed persona, not just a waste of words. Every action scene, or in general description of images and scenery is almost like watching a slideshow of pictures instead of reading words Great action, Amazing plot twists, Addicting plot.
The Tellus Mage
Fantasy · Junethephatcat