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Make MC a God and make him super strong then nerf them to the ground. I know the Danmachi universe has this setting but I feel it was poorly executed here. So this is a #strongtoweak kind of story? God’s don’t really have a path to getting stronger in Danmachi. They can only collect children to make their familia stronger. So his strength now will be his strength later unless you break the rules on Gods. But if you’re gonna break them anyway, why let people walk all over him now? Unless you’re gonna add another cheat later that doesn’t break the rules? But unfortunately, I already want to drop it after this chapter. Anyway, just trying to give honest feedback that hopefully helps.

Sorry, I think this is as far as I can go. I just don’t like this kind of MC. To be honest, he seems like a fool to me. His reactions to situations doesn’t make me empathize with him at all. Having arrogance but no strength is just suicidal behavior and I can’t even use the excuse that he’s a child who doesn’t know the world since he’s already old and knows the plot. Thank you though for trying to write Danmachi since I like the world setting but there’s not enough interesting fanfic out there in my opinion.

Guess some people like this type of story? I feel like story went downhill really fast. I know the author is trying to keep the MC from being OP (I mean 5 years of little to no change, completely brushed off the roots incident as if it didn’t happen, system can’t do anything) but is making the MC stressed gonna be a recurring theme?

Actually, I feel it’s quite fresh. Bringing a more daily life theme to Mahouka is challenging since all the intereting plots involve combat, fighting, or competitions. So keep going author. 👍