Badges 3
Moments 38
I'm turned on myself, felt it was me in the page... that's crazy hot, can I star this chapter please, I'll come back and read it all over again and a again
ch 56 I won't let you turn into a monster
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
sure will....that's intense , I like this
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
exactly my thought as well
ch 55 Is that all you can do?
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
your demons indeed took control, brilliant write
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
and I love the writer's words of expression and nature. such beauty painted in this chapter
ch 54 I have superpowers
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
that feeling, when you feel your body isn't reacting like it use to, and at times you get scared that it could one day just kill you. it not an easy thought to overcome. it's well Nancy, at time all we have it just believe and faith that we will be fine
ch 48 Alpha Baby or Leo?
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
brilliant
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
I knew she was going to bounce back...go girl. keep the fire up
ch 47 Long ride to the past
The Alpha's Human Luna
Fantasy · Marianne_2020
girls talk is always like that...it funny how girls enjoy disagreeing with each other. so fun
This is the right time to ask all the questions on my mind. My mum looks like she is in a good mood to have a mother-daughter conversation. We barely say one word to each other without a serious disagreement.
The Alpha's Human Luna
Fantasy · Marianne_2020
at time when you've lost a love one, it takes the love and attention of another to help sustain you. they'll be fine
ch 46 All day in bed
The Alpha's Human Luna
Fantasy · Marianne_2020
that's school a lovely mood to be in with a love one. that's beautiful
He gently took off my shoes and laid beside me on the bed holding me from behind.
The Alpha's Human Luna
Fantasy · Marianne_2020
not just you...I feel the same way tooo, let's just wait and see
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
yeah..that's the fun part, it's a sad chapter but still fun reading. soo cool
ch 45 The wake
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
sick line right there, you good girl..I love this brilliant use of words and literature here
"Yes, mum, I'll be down in a minute," I said as pull myself out of my bed and saunter behind her. I still couldn't bear to say goodbye to my dad.
The Alpha's Human Luna
Fantasy · Marianne_2020
love the expressions in there, powerful writing there
ch 44 Accident or murder?
The Alpha's Human Luna
Fantasy · Marianne_2020
sick expression there.. that's good
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Fantasy · Marianne_2020
hahaaa....call Karma, that's a good one.
ch 43 The death of Travis Neo
The Alpha's Human Luna
Fantasy · Marianne_2020
pretty intense chapter... are such chapters full of emotions not had for you to write
ch 43 The death of Travis Neo
The Alpha's Human Luna
Fantasy · Marianne_2020
this writer is just good
ch 52 Beg me
The Alpha's Human Luna
Fantasy · Marianne_2020