Webnovel Author: Swaggles - Novel Collection

My line was thrown back at me xD. Oh, it's fine. I thought it was unreasonable, but if it's only going to be 50 chapters then it's understandable. Unfortunately, all your readers will get the same impression so I think you need to tell them all at once via Writer's Thought, or another way.

I've read 14 thus far and won't stop there(I'll continue later). So far, I love the mindset of the characters(it really resembles their age). The pacing is good, and there aren't information loads forced. I haven't encountered any critical writing problems. As for the plot, it's good and really soothing to read(it's fixed). The only downfall is the low chapter release rate.

I like how the story started off dark and gradually became light, implying the phrase: "There's light at the end of the tunnel." It's a fairly good concept, and very intriguing. The pacing is also good. I can tell the author is taking time to build suspense for the readers. I have nothing to complain about thus far.

Honest review here. The beginning is slow-paced but it helps us grasp a better understanding of the characters and what we can expect. The writing is a bit unique, and the author uses it to his/her advantage(although I have minor issues with it). I love the interactions between the characters. It's a treat for my eyes. The plot is unique, especially the introduction. The only main problem I have is the early locked chapters. Other than that, good job and keep on updating!