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Sorry, my bad. I thought I saw one, but I guess less sleep is catching up to me.

I am writing this review after reading till the latest chapter right now (52 chapters). The writing quality is good. Not extremely good and not extremely bad. It is written mostly in the first person POV. Still better than most of the books (While I suspect the author may rely on assistance from GPT, as long as the pace and quality of the chapters remain consistent, I have no issues with it.) So far, not much story development has occurred, but there have been reasonable developments according to the pace of the novel (which is good imo). The protagonist isn't portrayed as an outright villain but rather as a cunning and intelligent character. Although there are some inconsistencies in the protagonist's personality (it's not not a big turn off. so you can still read if you were planning to read). Despite the harem tag, there seems to be only one potential member introduced till now (not sure on that as her relationship with the MC hasn't progressed significantly yet.). We don't know much about the world background yet. The author is dropping only pieces of information about the world in between the story (which is good as I prefer this over an info dump about the whole world in a single chapter.) If you enjoy stories where the MC transmigrates into a novel they've read, this one is worth a shot.

Nice power system and unique abilities. just some grammer problems and typos. Book with potential but depends on the author if he can further improve his writing skills.