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you don’t scam people by explaining and making them understand. it nearly always works by confusing them and make them think they should do whatever it is you want them to do. watch better call saul they make an amazing work of showing how scamming people actually works.
I purposely stood in a line where a fat kid stands behind me so once It is my turn to get my food, I smoothly compared my 'skinny' constitution to the fat kid behind me and explained how I needed more food in order to grow my 'underdeveloped' body.
Mark of the Multiversal Pretender
Movies · SlimeSage
get rid of redundancies like this. you just said they died. Saying that it made him an orphan is redundant. It feels as if you are saying that we can’t think of it ourselves. Basically some people will think you consider them stupid.
Heh, maybe that's why they died in an accident a few weeks later, rendering me as an orphan.
Mark of the Multiversal Pretender
Movies · SlimeSage
with the lack of good stories recently this may happen.
[Power Stones! Let's dominate the rankings!!]
Mark of the Multiversal Pretender
Movies · SlimeSage
something tells me the real number is 42069😂
Since he had nothing better to do and had a Sharingan, Kakashi began counting the seals. His eyes kept getting wider as the number kept rising! His throat became dry as he realized, '27569 seals! And a very high number of those seals are the ones that can hide other seals. So the actual number might be double that or even more!
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
YES
He cursed, 'What is that? Why are there so many seals? Did he put seals on the house to protect it or did he build a house there to have something to put the seals on?'
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
you can just say it’s AU. after all it is actually imposible to make a story in the third shinobi war without making up stuff because canon has more holes in the third shinobi war than suiz cheese.
[A.N: I know Nawaki died on the next day after his birthday and Tsunade was present in the village, it's not AU, I have put a reasonable explanation later in the story}
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
what is this supposed to mean i’m so confused.
Kushina had a sad look deep in her eyes, now that the emergency situation has been negated she won't be allowed to leave the village and spend time with her friends.
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
that just sounds stupid
"Let's retreat. We know too little about this world," said Edward, realizing how many things the movies never revealed. So, although he could continue fighting using the Soul Stone, he decided to just bail and return later.
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
the change of POV was atrocious. why did you set it up as if it is his POV when you just changed to third person.
ch 260 Weird World; Weird Inhabitants
Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction
Anime & Comics · Houssem
why even stab him and waste millions of points it’s just plain stupid and lazy writing just saying i’m making a lot so it doesn’t matter. It would be the same as if a billionaire just burns millions dolars. no one no matter how rich would just literaly throw milions in the trash can. It is sad seeing the quality of the story withering away as the author makes things just for the shock value.
ch 155 155 - A new Eric
MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
Movies · NunuXD
she wasn’t a normal human she has nosy butch energy over 9000.
Normally people would have run away in this situation but she was not a normal human. No, she was a reporter. With some resolve, she took out her spare camcorder and began recording the fight which gave her many ideas.
Marvel: Tech System
Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
pease throw this chapter on the trash. This extremely forced interactions are so cringe.
ch 24 Chapter 24 Jean Grey
Marvel: Tech System
Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
isn’t he supposed to be an SI?
Now, another man will replace him. Utakata didn't know when or how, but Yagura Karatachi was already chosen as the next Mizukage. And even though Utakata had seen and spoken with him, he knew little of him. He was considered the strongest in the village, but Utakata couldn't even imagine his goals. But he knew what Yagura would do, whether he wanted it or not.
Blood waters
Anime & Comics · Ironwolf852
author rapier’s can’t be used as swords siply because they are thin. which also means more fragile. The reason why they wheren’t widely used is because they can only be used effectively in long range stabbing attacks. their only advantages are that they are longer and faster at attacking than swords. they are also very fragile and very telegraphed. Which is the reason you have to be very fast when using them.
The essence of my words reached him precisely a moment before my rapier separated his head from his body.
Not the Last Airbender
Anime & Comics · Paracetam0l
there is no way a rapier can lice through bone in a single go. it would just snap halfway.
The essence of my words reached him precisely a moment before my rapier separated his head from his body.
Not the Last Airbender
Anime & Comics · Paracetam0l
the mere fact the he is alive is pure stupidity.
I came to with a jolt, twitching in place and first hearing screams and crying.
Not the Last Airbender
Anime & Comics · Paracetam0l
I honestly think the idiot is the author that wants us to believe that the sword master that was training him didn’t gave him a lesson on not underestimating his oponentes.
So, I heard the step the bandit took from behind the shelf, but by then it was too late to do anything. I could have dodged if I had been focused, but I hadn't taken the situation seriously and was relaxed until I heard something behind me. I felt invincible and smart, damn it. And for that, I got hit with something heavy.
Not the Last Airbender
Anime & Comics · Paracetam0l
Why a rapier. aren’t they too long and fragile. Sure it’s a fast attacking wepon, but has way less maneuverability than a short sword. Also rapiers so too little damage and there is no way a rapier is getting through any armor. So it is only effective against unarmored opponents. a rope dart would be a much better wepon for the MC. it would fit much more with his highly maneuverable and agile fighting style. It would also make much more damage than a rapier.
ch 18 Chapter 6. Training. Part 3.
Not the Last Airbender
Anime & Comics · Paracetam0l
some people in WN won’t even start reading if there isn’t a system.
I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
Anime & Comics · THE_V1S1ON