Imma slap the author over the head with THE BOOK
As soon as he freed the book, his pain subsided. He thought for a few moments before picking up the book again, but this time, he only held the book with his right hand.
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
Bro, is this novel written for people with some sort of mental impairment ? What on god‘s earth are those sentences
After he picked up the book with his right hand, he placed his left hand on it to hold the book with both hands.
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
Going to reveal yourself to everyone, dark lords and hero’s, as a dragon lord? Excellent choice….. moron
[Divine Dragon Dark Lord (Ethan): You'll know when the time comes.]
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
??????? A couple chapters ago MC (correctly) assumed that attacking riverside would draw wayyyy to much attention. But it is good to see his memory has degraded to that of a water flea
"In the early hours of the morning, three days from now, I will launch an attack on Riverside."
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
Wearing a black uniform with a black dragon symbol, to go fight a black dragon….. whatever could they be up to? MC must have fell on his head a lot.
Although Ethan didn't quite understand why the Bounty Guild was doing this, it was impolite to refuse a gift.
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
Yup
Once the quest was completed, Ethan ordered another shot of liquor at the bar, drinking heavily while planning his next move.
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
Just saying: This dude was probably an office worker a week back. How is he behaving like he grew up around mideval slaughter
"Unfortunately, I don't need the loyalty of the weak."
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
Can we finally get a timeline here? What do you mean years?
"Your guild is currently the lowest E-rank guild. The highest is S-rank, and only one such guild exists in our Sunset Empire. However, do not underestimate Riverside, as three B-rank guilds, primarily made up of Heroes, have emerged in recent years. They are expected to be promoted to A-rank in the near future."
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
7) 1:2 Ratio is bought instantly but NOBODY would ever buy 1:3….
ch 47 Chapter46-The Egg of the Divine Wing Dragon
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
So: 1) Author mentioned the heroes leave their gold in the camp before the fight and MC did not loot it. 2) MC has no scouts around his base? 3) Every fully discovered region gave a treasure chest, now it does not? 4)Baymax is C, how did he defeat 4 C and 1 C+ hero so easily? 5) Why did he not private trade and made it a public listing? 6) So magic skills can be learned and bought? Is there a power difference?
ch 47 Chapter46-The Egg of the Divine Wing Dragon
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
How’s there food in a store after 5 years? neither taken nor spoiled?
The two of them packed many boxes of food into their hands and they went out to the back of the store. There was a car parked there and Miss Kim put all the boxes inside before they drove off.
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
Try offering- I think, weird sentence again
Henry didn't even try ordering to answer the doubts that Adam had. Instead, he handed Adam the axe.
Fantasy · Alan_Wafula
Fictional/ CGI
But, this was absolutely the first time that he was seeing a human doing magic live. Although he had seen this happening in movies, that was of course acting and not real.
Fantasy · Alan_Wafula
Theme park/ zoo
In his mind, Adam thought that, perhaps, a pack of wolves had escaped from a game park. And since they were ferocious, it was obvious that they would kill humans in case they met them.
Fantasy · Alan_Wafula
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Fantasy · Alan_Wafula
Second and third sentence are nonsense
Adam, on the other hand, had been looking at Henry for a period of time now. He wondered what kind of behavior Henry possessed now. He had been staring at the air In front of him consecutively. And each time, he would stay that way for a long period of time.
Fantasy · Alan_Wafula
That’s the case - try using the short form
"Oh, since that is the case, then I can use an axe. These muscles of mine really want something that is heavy. And I like swinging a lot." Adam replied.
Fantasy · Alan_Wafula
Ugh, destiny is the worst concept to appear in webnovels. It’s just an excuse for authors to excessively use plot armor and contrivances…
[You have two chances to steal other's fate. When you kill a target that can have its life stolen, you will automatically steal their destiny.]
I Secretly Develop Myself In The Demon World
Eastern · Monochrome Glasses