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Will the author actually finish a story or will it be another forgotten one. Find out on the next episode of Dra.., but seriously finish the damn story, or most won't even bother reading any of tge other ones if they see you didn't finish a single one.

New chapter?

Its a good and finally a new MC look(its always Gojo, Jinwo and Toji, used to be Gilgamesh alot also). Grammar is good and the story development is also pretty good, now I just have one question.Is there going to be romance(please say yes but no harem please, you could pretty much make a perfect wife, kinda like the NPC-s from Overlord)?

Also is he gonna stay so emotionally dead?

Just one question, is he gonna stay so stupidly naive?

This story is quite hard to describe, you can0 call it great, good, amazing, annoying and even bad in some parts. There are no grammatical errors, at least none that I have noticed and the author did a good job connecting the MC to the Overlord world. The proggres of the story is good and now come the parts that need changing in my opinion.Never thought I'd say this but the chapters are too long, usually you read through a chapter and start a new one take a break and do something else, but here its like it never ends. I would rather the author makes chapters half of the current lenght. Also he mentioned in the beggining that the yggdrasil part would last around 5-6 chapter if I remember correctly, that was complete bullshit,theres over 25chapters and we are not even in the part where players start leaving the game. Might not seem much, but if you turn those massive chapters into normal ones, it would probably be around 100chapters of fricking prologue, which is annoying because a good portion of Overlord fanfics are dropped during the Yggdrasil part because they have a need to explain in detail the changes the MC experiences in himself and those aroung him, or shortly after they enter the new world. I don't really want to read an essay just to reach the part where he interacts with the residents of the new world.Hooefully this helps someone, and I'll be taking a break from this fic for a bit because I don't enjoy reading the chapters as much and will probably return in the future.