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Yes, but you know there are strong people who are more serious Op👍(But it would make a little sense with the title) but to make him master his skills like vector manipulation he would no longer need to be in contact with a vector, and the imagine breaker he could master his skills like KNT and that form of Touma's dragon and KNT (that and Touma's yellow blue arm). Well, just to say about the skills, first of all, I think we need to look at characters from the back that are very good examples: Aiwass,Anna Sprengel,Aleister Crowley,St.Germain, Othinus,True Gremlin.bro what i want to say is that despite looking good op, there are still stronger people and like that phrase "there can always be someone stronger than you" so yes Accel(Accelerator) would still have a long journey if not counting with the fate crossover which also has good characters Op.The best example I can give is an RPG think of Accelerator level 1 (the current fanfic Accelerator)for the characters I mentioned, in which they not only have a MUCH HIGHER level than him as skills, techniques Etc..but if you count the skills I mentioned and want to give him, he would have an absurd level up but it still wouldn't be enough for him to solo all the characters above without even a problem.Like he would lack some things like the phrase Touma said to him "people like you don't know what street fighting is" like this kind of thing that the character still lacks, gets stronger little by little, one step at a time you know.Battle Experience(Pure Battle), Manipulation etc..I like Accelerator (I have an addiction to liking characters that almost everyone hates)and for that very reason I say that he is not the absolute strongest character in the work and for that very reason, he can get stronger in the style that I told you,From experience he could be about fights, murders etc... experience gained without cheats (his powers) manipulation, Characters like Aleister who made a plan for the plan of the plan that has a backup plan I manipulate like everyone and the scenario, like Touma entered the academy city because of Aleister being him having Touma the imagine breaker within his plans etc...( literally Aleister has more preparation than Batman and ayanokoji Together)These are little things that would be nice to do little by little to make my point using RPG as an example the skills of the Accelerator(considering he will get them later on) All Fiction denies aspects of reality still being in the law of causality cause and effect like erase the cause and leave the effect Like he would erase the brain damage (cause) and because of that he never had brain damage (effect) at least that's what the Wiki said,About Book Maker:think of it as a very broken debuff and Op being able to pass through astral bodies (like the ghost girl 👻)in which the ability simply gives the user all the weaknesses and leaves the opponent at the same level Ex:The Accelerator has 1 of Hp he uses the Book Maker and your opponent gets 1 of Hp too and takes effects like him(Accelerator)and the weakest physically the opponent becomes weaker, also giving the opponent negative feelings depression, sadness etc.. (status effect using RPG)but there would be a kind of pattern that would give the worst of user type Accelerator has such status.Strength:1, Agility:1, Vitality:1, Dexterity:1 and Hp 1 the opponent also has the same status Intelligence and Wisdom would be -1 if you factor in the negative feelings (the status feats), and the Imagination Manifestation he has a weakness that like Accelerator's level would have to be on the same level as the thing he imagines he can't waver in his weak imagination ex:if he has a losing mentality like Kugamawa and he imagines a sword capable of killing the magic gods with one blow, the sword would break because of his mentality.being able to Imagination Manifestation the one with the most potential to evolve like in the RPG term it would be classified as rank A but could level up and rank)the same thing vector manipulation and imagine and it's all a matter of training (using RPG terms it would be like going up to level 100 and the skill would go up in rank but it stays at 1,rank B went to A but now and level 1).About the characters that I can't explain better basically take Yoshikawa's death,but imagine if it were Yomikawa (I believe you will understand this thought) which one do you think would have more impact on Accelerator,if you are going to compare Yomikawa manages to have a larger role than Yoshikawa while Yoshikawa has a smaller role than Yomikawa for the protagonist (you understand my point) basically made it bigger and more impactful which is why I said give these abilities and he revises characters like Sisters would have an impact both for the story (for his forgiveness) and for leveling his powers (specifically the tree of Clonoth).And this I just want to remind you again about characters that can beat Accelerator also have their own feats but he would also have his starting with those skills etc...I think it would be basic for him to be able to fight 1 magical god (maybe the entire True Gremlin) on this scale you understand, about reviving the characters you can revive those who are going to do something thing but consider Yoshikawa's ending in the fanfic the story, her role kind of ends right there even if she revived take into account her thoughts that were "maybe in a new life i can teacher" I believe I made my point clear. I have one more suggestion/idea, the Question about gamer/system power, which can be like a Naruto fanfic that I read and found a very cool idea (the fanfic cool, well mainly because of the idea the name of the fanfic It is Naruto: Infinite Possibility)The idea was that the author of the fanfic made something like a deal at the end of the chapter that only us (readers) and he (author)in which at the end of the chapter he puts the protagonist's status, skills, etc.. and at the end he puts a choice Ex: options a) he trains his Strength, b) he trains his Agility, c)He trains his dexterity,d)All others together.It had advantages and disadvantages but it was basically rpg style and basically This is kind of like a CYOA adventure story with an RPG feel to it . Where the reader's votes make choices.It was an interesting idea just in case if you want to do something like that, well I have a lot of ideas and possibilities but and that I will comment more on ideas, powers etc.. really even if I gave him All Fiction and revived Yoshikawa I just don't think it makes sense unless it's something like the Tobio sisters.Romance with Last Order it's not impossible (calm down, author, I'm not a lolicon, otherwise the FBI would have already arrested me)if she is old enough it would be ok together too to make her the protagonist you had suggested,I think the training arc could be after the invasion of academy city Accelerator's personality could start to change from a few starting there (no he won't turn into Touma he'll still be him) type but calm one and mock with the enemies (like Nero from Devil 5). Thanks author for listening to this 5 IQ retard (Me) and that's going to put more comments and more ideas/suggestions (in a way that doesn't make me look like I used Drugs, like those ideas that the speaker had used a lot of painkillers and crazy pills ) 1 more thing:your Jordans até COMPLETELY fake

1:thank you author for answering this lazy loser (me) and for accepting my or considering my suggestions/ideas. 2:About the system I was talking about was a Russian martial art, called system,The system also has another name “poznai sebia” or “Know thyself.” Now talked about system (Solo Leveling style)I agree with you about the protagonist being Op and getting harem etc...I don't think you need the system, but if you have it, make it Op but not at the same time (like RPG really RPG). 3: I think Accelerator could only gain skills from other characters (characters from games, series, anime, comics etc...) like an example that I already mentioned that the character of Medaka box kumagawa Misogi and their skills well op (Like Othinus with Gungnir)His skills are (just to let you know I got it from the Wiki) ALL Fiction:The ability to make anything "nothing".Because of this,he can undo anything that has been damaged,and this he has no qualms about being destrutível.However,he has stated that once he removes something, he cannot return It as It has become "Fiction".His ability can even reverse His own death as well as the death of others.(He doesn't haver Full Control of his Power Because,unless he's careful,the entre world would become nothing.) Imagination manifestation: Ability to impose the image of immaterial objects onto those around him. This does take physical form and can be used to harm. Non-fiction: The only way to reverse the effect of "All fiction". But all fiction is still dangerous even with this ability. April Fiction: basically all fiction but only last 3 minutes before returning. Book Maker:Book Maker requires he to use a special screw; a slotted pan head screw (with a - on it), as opposed to the Philips screws (with a + on them) that he usually wields. When Book Maker is activated, the screw stretches to the length of a sword. When he stabs someone with the screw, it turns the target into a Minus by bringing that person to Kumagawa's level: body, spirit, technique, intellect, and talent; all fall to match Kumagawa. Despite the fact that the screw needs to pierce the victim to take effect, the damage done to the body is nearly zero; Kumagawa labels Book Maker as an ability that only soils the heart. As a side effect, the victim's hair also turns white, though the original color is restored once Book Maker's effect wears off and the screw dissolves. Leg eating Forrest: He covers the floor with flat end screws, forcing both himself and his opponents to balance on top of them. Though the screws are not sharp, the weight alone can still cause heavy damage should someone fall. ( However, in truth, all the screws are Book Maker screws; their heads are buried so that his opponent cannot distinguish them from his other screws.) Physical/normal abilities: Superhuman Physiology: Most frightening trait is his tenacity; no matter how many times he is beaten down, he always gets back up.meaning he can easily shrug off any kind of beating. Even without All Fiction, he is capable of bouncing back from injuries that would cripple other humans for months. Combat Expert: He knows everything about the weaknesses of the human body, and can easily defeat multiple opponents by targeting their weak points. Presence Erasure: Kumagawa is able to erase his "aura" with All Fiction, making it impossible for his foes to sense his presence outside of the five sense. Final:I think it doesn't need a system it could just be he gained skills/powers like I said, it's also worth mentioning that he should also have a superhuman physique(Like kanzaki that saint who has a physique far superior to normal mages, Sogiita Gunha and her"Guts",Kakine who literally has a body made of dark matter,Touma himself when he had his arm "ripping off" when I create KNT) What about Accelerator getting Kumagawa's skills could be in the crisis of infinite worlds created by Othinus(in the same way that Touma was tortured by Othinus in several worlds) the original owner of these abilities (Kumagawa) had them based on various traumas and his own negative mind He could get it after experiencing several worlds, like a world where he attacked by everyone whether magician or Esper, friend or foe.And with the skills, but mainly All Fiction, he could do several things, for example: he could erase the 12 basic colors, "heal" someone by turning all "damage" to nothing, "revive" someone by turning their "death" into nothing.Send All these made by the original owner.You could do it could revive certain characters that can have some relevance to the story, like Frenda for harem(yes i know more and may have some relevance to the story) the Sisters (which can be useful by the clonoth tree)No he wouldn't get lost that would be decided by the clones but it would be good for him to "deliver" the innocent lives he took but no, he would not forgive himself but at the same time if he forgave you know and taking the that "Hero and Villain" thing he's "evil" and that's why he can't be doing "good"thing.he should accept his "monster side and his human side".He will be more neutral neither good nor bad just him... That phrase from Touma "you don't need a reason to help someone" but then he can send a reverse "You need a reason not to help someone".I don't know if it was possible to understand the reasoning, it can very well be bad and good like this being neutral.And that Author thanks for listening this far but you know you don't have to make my suggestions if you don't want to I want to remind you that you are the author and I the reader just gave my suggestions and my own thoughts on the story and how it might turn out, even if it takes 3 years (I know I'm being dramatic but it's true) just don't abandon the fanfic the story is very good take your time but don't abandon the fanfic that's all.Thanks author for reading about idiot (me) have a nice day and one more thing:your jordans are fake.

Hello author, first of all great fanfic I'm still reading (more specifically chapter 34) but I came to leave my thoughts: (being more suggestions) there should be a training arc more being about the physique not the powers because the Accelerator is a lot of Op,but if he doesn't have knowledge about something (magic for example since it works with different laws)he simply becomes very weak and can lose very easily as he was demonstrating in his fight with aiwass.But it is not about the powers that I speak more specifically his physique because he has a weak physique and his power does working it is useless, as it was shown in the battle against kihara and touma in which the fight against kihara he was slaughtered.More like agr in fanfic he has the imagine breaker I think he should train his physique because that is his only weakness (not counting his knowledge) plus Accelerator having a physique Strong would be nicer, he wouldn't need to abandon his powers and he's used when needed (if you decide to heal the brain that would be interesting) because it wouldn't depend so much on the of his ability, not to mention that this is toaru then that have fights like this (especially now with him in place of the protagonist)he could learn martial arts like the system,(Russian martial arts),Taekwondo,Karate etc... since one of the things present in toaru is Touma's (protagonist) fighting style, a very skilled street fighter and his imagine breaker skill,more now that the skill is with Accelerator it loses some of the essence of toaru, because Accelerator only uses it against things he has no knowledge of (magic) and esper skills when He doesn't want to calculate the vectors, so I think it would be cool to have a bow like that or something like him training physically (like seriously if he's physically strong and almost impossible to defeat He) and would come back with little of the fight we know from toaru(noises of Touma punching things) the agine breaker was going to have more prominence, and he would use it more by mixing it with his fighting style with his vector manipulation ability. About writing: well english is not my language, i use a translator so i can't give tips or anything like that, not to mention i'm not a grammar guy but for me it's fine the way it is. About the story: I don't have much to say, just that your story is very good, would you like to write the crossover I think it would make it cooler and open a new path for the protagonist to get stronger/Op (if it's your intention to make him stronger)Since there's going to be a crossover with fate, I recommend you read a fanfic called A Nascent Kaleidoscope.You can take inspiration to make the protagonist stronger in that style if that's the case. Character development: I think it could be in the arc From(Othinus)the New Testament being the Accelerator who would experience the suffering of countless "worlds" there is a fanfic called The Esper and The God Magic,Very good and only has 10 chapters (I'm waiting for updates 😭) more that shows a development in the character (Accelerator) not to mention the Original othinus had a lot of contribution to Touma's character development,That's why I think you could do something in this style more precisely in the arc new testament Making Accelerator a better anti-hero than he is now. Harem:Othinus (waifu always has to be in the present in the harem logically😎)and any other girl you find interesting, since harem is one of the things that can't be missing in toaru I remember a comment in chapter 9 wof the fanfic Who had a vote for harem that said "toaru no and toaru without a harem" (I don't remember it could have been my imagination) to say "it makes sense" to have a harem because I think it was said in the novel that one of the reasons for Touma's harem is also the imagine breaker For he nullifies the red thread of fate. Fights As I said earlier Accelerator doesn't have to use his ability just to not be too dependent on it because in the cases mentioned before he would be useless and thus also not leaving the imagine breaker just in the background so he would also have to learn to fight normally and thus gaining experience to better use the Ib And so he would mix it with his fighting style using his power. Skills/powers: I don't know if you plan to give him more skills/powers if it's 1 could start with The Magic of Fate Mages(not counting True magics) Magecraft Which is a type of magic that would be very Op if it were used by the espers because it involves calculations and sciences Not to mention that Accelerator could learn a lot of Magecraft and seriously it would be quite Op if combine Magecraft+Vector manipulation=Op Since fate magic is not that different from toaru (not true magic since it would be something on the level of a magical god) I think That in the novel, Index even says that "magic and science with their own laws" (something like that). Now if you give Accelerator new skills (not counting what he can get like black wings, white wings, platinum wings etc...)There's a character I know called Kugamawa misogi he's from a (very good) manga called Medaka box I think anyone who likes Toaru will like Medaka box, it's worth reading Medaka box I believe Despite the beginning being a bit boring (for me) it gets cool with a while.Enough of advertising and talking about Kumagawa Misogi's abilities(a different character Similar to Accelerator) those who like Accelerator I believe will like this character too. (I'll put his skills in another comment) I would say more things but for now and only and they are just ideas, suggestions you (author) do not You only need to follow them if you want I admit that I would like my ideas to be put into practice despite being a bit greedy on my part, but even without that the fanfic is good and you can post it whenever you want, just don't abandon the fanfic. Thanks for reading have a nice day (seriously a lot of patience to read this)mucho texto.