I like really the updating speed (a chapter per day), I didn't really like the chara design of the MC because there isn't any :'( . I didn't find grammar mistakes so that's a plus. As for the overall story, it's good and has a lot of potential.
Fantasy · MHK_
The first time I read it I thought so too, but now it is way better, trust me just give it a shot.
I read the first version of the chapter but this is definitely better !! Keep it up
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I like really the updating speed (a chapter per day), I didn't really like the chara design of the MC because there isn't any :'( . I didn't find grammar mistakes so that's a plus. As for the overall story, it's good and has a lot of potential.
How to Become an Apex Being
Fantasy · MHK_