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good chapter but please don't have him revive the enemies he killed then just say that thanks for the fun

why make him op when he can't even kill someone trying to kill him and his mother does he not have a dragon bloodline?

harem is ok but please don't add to much devil girl or rias peerage

why is the mc sticking to durdsley and folowing the plot with superman power he should at least do something diffrent from the cannon

i don't understand is the mc actual harry potter or a reincarnated person?

it's all cliche i don't know if mc is a devil or a naive dense and idiotic protaganist

mc is a weeb and every weeb know magic is influenced by emotion i think he should have been able to figure it out by atleast 2 or 3 months not years and think of it like he made a new discovery

well he doesn't have to destroy but make his own faction and kill those whose in his path

almost every fanfic has been the same this one could be very interesting fanfic if mc isn't trapped in cannon

why are you keeping mc in hogwarts only there are other schools which he can go. This mc is being a pushover

i think option 1 or 2 both will be good. and i would like to recommend the type of personality of mc like the mc of the fanfic Deal with the devil by crossedge

according to the situation mc have gone through so far he should be a little more cold and ruthless i mean he was in the void and the memories of harry potter should make him more ruthless because they are all bad

MC is very passive when it comes to deal with protagonist and other characters i mean he has enough influence on xiao wu to not admit her to tje same acadmey aa tang san

this woild be much better i perfer a story in which mc acts like the Devil and doesn't care much about appeasing other beings 😈

why reincarnate mc as lucifer when he is obsessing over the plot and getting on the good grace of other devil and not utilizing lucifer title and memories correctly

don't hate your work but almost every fanfic i read about highschool dxd is always the same with mc developing feelings for either rias,sona or akeno out of nowhere its cliche