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20 chapters later- YOU FUCKED ME OVER AND YOUR LUCKY THAT I HAVEN’T BLOWN MY BRAINS OUT!!!!!!!

I‘m only on chapter 50 and already aware of its completion. However,I cannot stand the dialogues being written so causally, especially the adults, they are centuries old yet they talk like children! Put some actually REALISM in it, granted it’s a cultivations novel. And enough of the dialogues ending in exclamations marks, we don’t need to yelling in EVERY conversation. And don’t jokingly wave off injury in “friendly” meetings. There is a time and place for everything to get SERIOUS. And yes, I just saw the COMEDY TAG as I wrote this so that that explains a lot. I’m not sure if all cultivation novels are immensely exaggerated such as this one, but it’s certaintly not my cup of tea. Now my intention wasn’t just to bash you for absolutely tourting me with such a read and cringing at a ANY possible character interaction along and above all else making me have hope in the novel, but just disappointment in the end. I almost never EVER write a review this however needed it. I have a lot more to say, but I think I got it out my system…. for now. I do hope it will get better as I read the through the chapters. Probably not. But other than that just a little helpful criticism to you. Add the basis of reality in it. -I‘m just gonna put this here in advance for who knows. Edit:

I’m proud to say that this my first apoc-alypse reading experience and it has been an intriguing story! You have my utmost gratitude Author-san! Please be well.