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you're welcome! I'm looking forward on your development as an author

aside from the problems of the word 'mc' being repeated over and over in the beginning chapters there's not much problems , it gets a bit annoying sometimes especially for a reader to read a word like every 2 or 3 sentences.Based on what I've read so far the plot is great the protagonist is a bit dumb wanting to live a peaceful life and not incurring the 'mc' wrath but planned to meddle in his situation with the church helping him gain his freedom yada yada which in turn gave attention to him making him not able to escape from the 'mc' as he wanted, which is pretty stupid tbh .