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The one that hooked me into this Webnovel is the concept of multiple timelines which sounds like a multiverse concept, this Webnovel already blew my mind as the MC learns from his granddaughter about the world and from some beings that are somehow connected to her which is a rare kind of concept. But I still can't see the Leveling though, or I believe that the Leveling will come later on..? Please give it in the upcoming chapters.

It is only five chapters and I hope your Webnovel will grow, for the first chapters already made me noticed how complicated and how sci-fi this Webnovel is. By the way, the System looks legit as a Magic ability since the System concept has always been around to a magic character.

My only problem with this Webnovel is the place that the story takes which is very vague since most of the places constantly keep getting destroyed. I hope you didn't destroy the MC's current place since it would be a bummer if the house keeps getting destroyed each time.

A very good concept, a black shadow baby, I can see the Solo Leveling immediately from the first chapters and I thought at first that the 'father' was the one who will have the System. But when I read it, the baby twist is amazing. Usually from every novel regarding this that I've read, mostly the guys that died in the Double Dungeon become a Player but not in this Webnovel since the readers were given something unexpected.

Author-it seems this Webnovel is getting more peaceful after the Oberon battle, and I think that Martin is not a very good character either since his interaction is so barren. But still, Martin is a quite negotiable character which I like the most, he's not that type of MC that just gets random power by accident and already being that OP in the first place as he keeps continuing to amaze me as he learns magic from his Deviant Veliona. Btw, could you give us an official art on Veliona. I just looked at your official art on Rangga and I think, he's design is quite good. Props to you author. Thank you...

A fast-pacing, time-traveling, level up-like character that tries to change time with sci-fi and magic integrated in order to increase the tension since the story will be about destroying things right? Just like the MSPLU previous Webnovel, it seems this story is not just a Copy-Cat of MHA and Solo Leveling now like the precious one since I can see the originalism of the world and characters.

The main character is quite good, especially I have never seen an old MC in the first chapter in the future like this as your MC seems to be simp-ing his own granddaughter or some sort which I say it's quite unique rather than simp-ing over a girl like the usual mainstream MC's.

I already read MSP LU and you say it will be rebooted huh ... well then good luck since I kinda find your writing has been improved in this Webnovel chapter and I must say I kinda felt sad since this is just a side story but it is okay, keep it up.

Thanks, author, Even though your grammar is bad but still the chapter's extras help me understand the stories as you delved into a crazy story that sometimes blew my mind. KEEP GOING AUTHOR, I WILL ALWAYS READ THIS WEBNOVEL!!