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Jump from one arc to the next way too fast. Too much and i really mean too much face slapping it just gets really annoying. Mc doesn't even fight which makes all this shii the more boring. The whole novel is nonsensical

Read up to 20 and it's more than i can bare. Mc is the center of the story but is the worst element in the story. Forceful plot which is really damm obvious and an mc who is really braindead. Vampires have really good senses so there's no way he wouldn't know who is in his surroundings. Someone that's been alone for 6 years would naturally be a lot smarter than the portrayed mc. Just shit writing really. The government is fighting an otherworldly entity. The most logical thing to do is distribute ability bokks extra for humans to become cannon fodder, sigh. One of the worst reads in a while

Just reached chapter 376 and i feel weirded out by that the fact that all of a sudden you start writing about mc start eating p*zzy and sniffing it and drinking divine jucies and gulping down squirt like what the fuck bruh