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Let's know who is saying what just like your new chapters
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You have a lot to edit and please do so soon
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Another cramped paragraph
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Get in depth
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Too cramped some space needes
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Remember to change it Author!
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It's too cramped
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He replied with a cheeky expression Indication
°Seems like you're taking training seriously°
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Reminder!
The old man was ready to retaliate. Spinning on his heels he swang his spear horizontally but the boy blocked it.
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A comma needed here
Running at a great speed towards his opponent with his training dual swords in hand, his opponent was holding a spear and ready for the attack but wasn't moving he was watching his every move.
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An example and you can also describe their emotions
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