when you name the main character Derek Hale was that a teen wolf reference 🤔🫣🤨
sorry I meant to say water magic not automagic
hey creator of the world conquest I've been reading your book for several years now and initially I absolutely loved it I personally had hopes to be a web novel author and a lot of my initial ideas were very similar to yours in the fact that he chooses to cultivate all systems unfortunately in the last six months the quality of the story has really dropped off ever I have been relentlessly reading it I just want to let you know that I have enjoyed reading a book these last couple of years and I hope you have a great journey as well author and thank you so much for writing a story that I enjoyed I'm going to check if you have any other novels that I can read if not I hope one day you'll write another one but I think this one's probably coming to a close and you should finish it up even though I think it's been going on for too long and the content is starting to get repetitive and empty I think you should start again with another novel instead of trying to write for every power system you should write about someone who explores a single system more completely and does everything it is possible to do with that specific system for example learning every way there is to use automagic and being the most complete watermags in the world instead of being someone who's good a certain part of every system or every system I have started to realise that if you make a character that is perfect in everything there's nothing to write about and that's part of the reason your book has fallen off because every chapter it just wow look how amazing the MC is and any sort of hurdles that he encounters feel fake that's not to say you're not a good author I think you've just gotten yourself you've written yourself into a dead end it's unfortunate you've just biting off more than you can chew with the abilities of this character lots of love wish you well , Leon
could have been a 4 out of five pretty decent cultivation novel if it wasn't for the 14 year old **** disgusting harem garbage the characters are so bland and the main character tries to Pretend that he is not a disgusting pig when he is i'm a dude by the way and I'm not a feminist I just find that he's a little **** **** It's such a shame too because the design of the cultivation system that he has made is pretty decent i'd give it an 8 out of 10 which is fairly rare in cultivation novels most are about a 6 such a shame
This may look like a fake review but I love this book's wholeheartedly if you like cultivation and if you especially like understanding how the power systems in cultivation or power fantasy series works you will love this please read
im leaving a 0 star revue becoase of this chapter it was sucha good sory to f**k the auther
this is without a dout the best sorry i have read on any online platform in 2 yeas of reading i can only say thank you
I have been reeding online fantasy novels for 1 and a 1/2 yrs now first I'm finding realistic late teen mc reminds of myself 3-4 yrs ago
I would just like to let the author know that the beginning of this novel is a severe put off I was initially not going to continue reading it and until I was halfway through writing this comment I changed my mind to give it another try I will be skipping the first chapter though I just like you to know that no competent surgeon would ever say calm down the body is a machine or whatever the f*** else he said the initial impression of this main character is an arrogant show off with no real substance and by substance I mean there was no thought put into the surgery whatsoever I'm not a surgeon and even I can tell how poorly this beginning is written otherwise your grammar is fine it's just the wording and words spoken that is cringe I look forward to trying the rest of this novel and I will add another comment later
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