Ik that it's a fanfic. Was a constructive criticism. Also a one year old is too small, do they sell the books to one year olds?
ch 0 4 Growing up, Part I
Anime & Comics · Cole_Bromley
Rn he is evolving em. So he will take em when they become rinnegan. Spoiler- He will kill Danzo dw.
ch 725 Chapter – 718 Evolution or Death?
Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive
I agree, tho, others are worse.
ch 416 Chapter 412 : RIP Privacy
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
The overall in my comment is not for his whole life but rather like a conclusion for the answer.
ch 416 Chapter 412 : RIP Privacy
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
I agree with some of ur words. But ig you should re read the context. I am only refering to the creating an organisation thing. It never was about his entire character.
ch 416 Chapter 412 : RIP Privacy
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Safety net. And even if Hiruzen is seemingly better here, he isnt totally kind and not the only potential threat. There are also many other things the organisation can help him, from small stuff like funds to larger ones like eliminating someone who is a threat to fuijin but he cant act himself. And most importantly, it makes the plot better.... Overall, Ithink Fuijin is being real and not dark.
ch 416 Chapter 412 : RIP Privacy
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Yes, most stories i have read have OCs who are not well written or have depth making me feel like the new characters were not a good idea. This on tho is one of the few which make the new characters good and make the story better.
ch 0 5 New Habitat (3)
Anime & Comics · Librarian_Heroen
And ik that its pure fiction, but considering the author is giving scientific proofs, i tried to help
ch 57 Lightning release chakra mode
Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
Ur msg was easy to misunderstand
ch 57 Lightning release chakra mode
Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
Fajans rule and its applications. Ur just a stupid weeb maybe?
ch 57 Lightning release chakra mode
Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
Maybe just taking in yang chakra as it is free energy, then applying/adding yin to it to make it more compatible.
ch 413 Chapter 409 : Increased Cellular Activity!
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
You could explain black lightning with science linked to that of this world. Tho I doubt Sato would have known it unless he was decent at chem(a bit over HS lvl). Tho if u need/want it, I will explain it in a over simplified version(im bad at explaining)- When atoms bond with each other(especially covalently) the attraction b/w the atoms after meeting specific criterion create distortions, when energy, generally photons or electrons enter it, the distortion and subsequent emission leads to colour/light of different wave length. More the distortion, more is the light captured. So chakra bonds might just absorb all the photons, giving the lightning black color, tho considering how lightning works this is neigh impossible.
ch 57 Lightning release chakra mode
Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
Damn tftc
ch 11 UN meeting-1
History · FanficWorld07
I doubt it, atleast it wont happen soon as the mc is 14
ch 19 Tsunade!
Anime & Comics · Starstruck_1
Tftc
ch 719 Chapter – 712 Trap or Trapped?
Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive
Thats why he is trying to make it ppl based. Other businesses etc would try to stop that, unless they are also satisfied.
ch 10 Laying the Foundations-2
History · FanficWorld07
Well nvm his next actions just disapprove this
ch 405 Chaoter 402 : Fujin Vs Danzo
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Also unlikely to be used as. A Birthday gift
ch 0 4 Growing up, Part I
NARUTO, Kushina's Brother
Anime & Comics · Cole_Bromley