you may want to consider changing the word "atrocious" to something else as it means something is really bad, but in the context you used it I think you meant really good. you used it about halfway into this previous chapter when he was sparring with little tiger
ch 0 8 As Expected of My Brother Yuan!
Eastern · Rainy Blue Skies
your welcome. I'm really enjoying it!
ch 28 Isolde
Games · MiuNovels
the book has some good potential. But there are many mistakes so far. Pronouns are interchanged for Lin's friend. Words are used in place of others that make no sense or change the context and meaning of what was meant. As well as items and animals are switched up within a mere few words of each other such as a few stray dogs suddenly become a pack of wolves.
ch 0 4 New Boss "Wolf King"
Games · Fallen_Angelss
enjoying the book so far. my only "complaint" would be the chapters are a bit short
ch 31 Time to re-take the affinity test
Fantasy · Gladstone_
im liking the book. but there are some slipups than could be corrected. like interchangable pronouns for the male and female characters when they are clearly straight male and female. some other words that are added could go or just change them to ones that make more sense.
ch 0 6 Reporting Achievements to Deacon
Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
im enjoying the book thus far, and there are few mess ups here there, there is one that bothers me the most and that is the names are not constant. they start as one then flip to another nd then flip back again. It makes parts of this a bit confusing until one figures out it isnt a new character being inteoduced oddly.
ch 43 Fusion, Rainbow Phoenix Chicken
Fantasy · Snow Over A Thousand Hills
need to work on catching name mistakes. but otherwise I am thoroughly enjoying this book
ch 37 Main Weapon
Spirit Taming
Fantasy · 1King_Rep1