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definitely the most intriguing chapter so far
ch 0 9 Arc 1 Chapter 9: What We Discuss At The Table
Xenonia: The World Of Swords And Blood
Fantasy · AikoNakajima
was that suppose to be a cutoff?
"Yuki, you always seem very knowledgeable about various magicks and donums. You some kinda Arcana professio?"
Xenonia: The World Of Swords And Blood
Fantasy · AikoNakajima
"By the Caelestis" is pretty clever
"By the Caelestis, do you ever shut up!" Akko retorted before squatting as her donum: 'Dei Manus,' activated. Within an instant, not only had she left the ground, but she was in front of Adeo, and the two began exchanging blow for blow, causing shockwaves throughout the forest. After an hour, the lesson had concluded, and it was time for everyone to return home for the day. The trio began making their way home while walking on the beach. The two redheads were riddled with bruises and cuts from their show off of a battle.
Xenonia: The World Of Swords And Blood
Fantasy · AikoNakajima
Magicks?
"Fulgur...Corpus..." Yukina's body surged with an abundance of dormant magical energy as her body was enveloped in an aura of sky-blue lightning. The jaws of her classmates dropped since they could barely cast anything during their fight, but it would seem that Yukina had experience already, but to her, this came as a surprise as she had never used any magicks in her life. It was as if her mind and body already knew how to manipulate her Arcana.
Xenonia: The World Of Swords And Blood
Fantasy · AikoNakajima
Interesting pun there
"Nice to meet you. Did you have something you need to speak with me about?" Yukina went straight to the meat of this conversational soup.
Xenonia: The World Of Swords And Blood
Fantasy · AikoNakajima
Lol "Manhandling"
"Akko, what the hell are you doing manhandling me like that? I thought I was gonna die!" Yukina complained to Akko.
Xenonia: The World Of Swords And Blood
Fantasy · AikoNakajima
Though the scene may not be for everyone, the wording here is actually quite good. The way it's worded makes the scene, (in a kind of imitating way) come to life.
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Xenonia: The World Of Swords And Blood
Fantasy · AikoNakajima
The story so far is really captivating I like the story's characters too and the plot has a very steady pacing. My favorite chapter is definitely chapter, it has the most interaction between characters and a bit of action to boot as well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Xenonia: The World Of Swords And Blood
Fantasy · AikoNakajima